Reviews for Strawberries |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I normally don't ship Chakotay and Seven, but this had me giggling like a schoolgirl. :) As usual, awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK then. This was wonderful and in my version of the canon-timeline, this is exactly how it REALLY happened... Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, that was really nice, and it should've been on the show, thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this! :) WELL DONE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A sweet little beginning for them. I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it! its a geat story, and i cant wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh come on! you cant leave it there! You need to continue with the story! please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The characters are well-characterized, and your ear for the way they speak is obvious. Chakotay's observation of Seven, and the affect it has on his feelings toward her, are believable and rather charming. Come to think of it, Seven's pretty charming and endearing herself. A good beginning for this pairing, and one I could picture. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, how I enjoyed this. So simple yet so elegantly portrayed. The small details you put into this make it a very lovely read. Thank you for writing, and for keeping Chakotay and Seven in perfect characterization. I loved this! |
![]() ![]() ZOMG! A Chakotay/Seven fic! And it's not about him angsting over Janeway! ILU. Really well done, nicely written, characters are very much themselves. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww Sweet! Love the strawberries thing you've got going. (Yummy) The only thing I can say, is I don't think Seven would have blushed, even if she did like Chakotay. It was OOC because she doesn't blush at all at anything in the series. Cute story. Keep writing. Maybe you could do a story that isn't a drabble? I'd like to see that. All my love, from me :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG, thank you! This is such a sweet and tender story. |
![]() ![]() Very nice story. I thought you captured the characters well & made it a sweet moment. |