not bad, I really did like the twist given to it. Never expected the shikamaru and Kakashi thing. I like it. Keep it up. Just dieing to read the next chapter.

I LOV DIS! PLZ, UPDATE S SOON AS POSSIBLE! I NEED 2 READ MORE! WHATS GOIN' ON WITH POOR NARU-CHAN!

Who are Narutos real parents? What happend to him and which Uchiha was it? Please update when you can :)

no way! so naruto was...itachi's lover? fugaku's lover?...mikoto's maybe...xD okay i'll stop guessing now

great update! really quick too OwO! thanks a lot!

How is Sasuke going to brake up Rakuto and Naruto? And when will Sakura find out Sasuke is gay? please update when you can :)

Oh, poor Naruto. And yeah! Iruka!

very nice.

seems naru-chan has a BOYFRIEND! xD can't wait to read the next!

This seems like a good story so far.

Some grammar suggestions:

since and sense need to be switched

it's follow not fallow; it's board not bored; I'm pretty sure you meant his instead of her

make sure to read over your sentences: there are words missing and some of the words are missing letters

also make sure to have words in the right order and use proper past and present tense

Hope you don't think that I'm mean, I just wanted to give you suggestions on your grammar errors. Good luck on your next chapter!

MAN! I LOV DIS STORY SO BLOODY MUCH!

IT'S FUNNY, BRILLIANT, FUNNY, INTREEGING AND DID I MENTION FUNNY!

Hehe, Kakashi... he's such a pervert.

i ned to see the next chapter son! please update soon DD:!

I love this so far. Hope you continue it soon.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what happen next.

talk about havingh it hard,naruto wouldnt really be able to go very far in his state think sasuke would have woken up when kakashi and asuma came in but i guess hes really deeply wait for updates hope you can soon