| Reviews for Edge of evening |
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   TheFirstLostGirl chapter 2 . 8/25/2009 ...why is it unfinished...please finish it...! |
| Chishio Whitlock Hale chapter 2 . 8/17/2009 MORE! |
| AliceCullenFreaK chapter 2 . 6/28/2009 o_O what thats all we get. sigh, good work takes time, but i really want to know how alice and edward act to that. uh-oh. _ update really really soon! please? |
| brokenfromthepast chapter 2 . 6/28/2009 This is really good, and I like it. I can't wait to read more when it comes out. |
| abbey carey chapter 2 . 6/27/2009 Anyone up for the job of editing is hereby given permission. I am a writer that despises punctuation and all that jazz. I wish I could continuously write my stories and them to just magically be edited. Any help is appreciated. : ) |
| Eyes for Eternity chapter 2 . 6/27/2009 Awesome sounding story. But you start paragraphs too often...it breaks the sentences to be hard to read correctly. Update soon. Keep writing! Peace! ~Eyes |
| abbey carey chapter 1 . 6/23/2009 Almost ready to publish 3 full chapters. Story complete! First time writing and publishing - thanks for reviews. Should have much more by Thursday June 25th |
| AliceCullenFreaK chapter 1 . 6/23/2009 Update soon, im really curious on where you are going to take this story, it was really short. :( |
| Tay0124 chapter 1 . 6/23/2009 Like it but could be a little longer. Longer chapters please! _ |
| brokenfromthepast chapter 1 . 6/23/2009 This is really good, and I like it. I can't wait to read more when it comes out. |
