Reviews for Luke's Life |
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![]() ![]() Ah, I'm just starting to read it and I find this isn't ... Complete But actually, it's good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "OHMYGOD" I gush. "This chapter is, like, so funny! It put a smile on my night!" I stick my finger on my cheek and skip around in a circle, all the while telling everyone how great HAYDENpfan is. Suddenly, i froze. Not as in "suddenly stopped", but froze in mid-air, smiling like a ditz, the finger still stuck to the cheek. I stayed like this for a few more seconds and landed with a plop on my face. I shot up, looking a lot like a seal, gasping "She's right! She's right! I DO say 'great' too much!" in horror. Well, HAYDEN, that is my story. Hoped you enjoyed it! A little thank you for your hard work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE SON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() on second thought, update the emerald life and the silver age first, then update this. actually, that sounds like a lot to do, so mainly just update the silver age! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aah! hilarious! luved it write more please |
![]() ![]() ![]() So its a new AU every time ? BTW. Best Luke POV i've ever read! UPDATE THIS MORE OFTEN! |
![]() ![]() I like this story, but you shouldnt let them forgive him all the time and you should make some of these a story, it would be a good idea |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! LUKE PAIN HAPPY ME! I THOUGHT LUKE WOULD HAVE BEEN TONY! UPDATE SOON! PS BRING ON THE LUKE TORTURE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, that was kind of funny, but REALLY random. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So funny... "Everyone looked at Thalia." I was expecting her to kill him or something, although your ending was much better... Anyway, great chapter, I'm really looking forward to the next one. Update soon, Thalia Castellan. |
![]() ![]() lol, I am really looking forward to the Luke's Life alternatives. Let's just hope they're as funny as the first Chapter. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hayden, That is a great idea lol Update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes! real story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool! Can't wait to read more ways his life could have turned out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok...that was...different...a bit dry..but different... -)-Cyclops *Mairead Nesbitt* |