Such a beautiful story! Made me laugh and cry throughout!

The end is so Zelos!

This tugged at my heartstrings so much I loved your characterisations of Zelos and Lloyd :)) okay the language was kind of awkward at parts but it's still great :D

oh gods... you had me wanting to cuddle Zelos at the beginning or at least throw Lloyd at him ;

but then I was laughing my ass off at them with the way Zelos put all the blame on Lloyd!

kinda wanna kick all those girls though...

~Mizu

Hey, don't apologize! I, for one, absolutely loved this! It was really sweet, and a look into Zelos that I absolutely loved! So thank you for sharing this!

That was fantastic! I love the way you write Lloyd and Zelos.

This is really, really, good! I love it, it was written very well!

*inner voice* (But, but! Zelos's hair! D: *cries*) xD Its a good story and its a very good idea, but I do love Zelos's hair to much for it to be healthy. xD

Totally NOT fail! :DD Totally awesome~ :'3 I like how you wrote this, so beautiful. 8D Like last part best XD Are you gonna write more Zelloyd? 8D If you are I wanna read them :3

That is such a sweet story.

Don't you DARE degrade it by calling it stupid, hun.

Never call your work crap. It's beautiful.

I loved every word of it.

It has all the elements for a great story.

RUN, LLOYD! RUN!

Zelos always said, life is like a box of chocolate's.

Never know what you're gonna get.

Judiro

I gotta say, I absolutely adored the end of this one. Lloyd SHOULD have slept in. I really enjoy your writing style and the way you presented Lloyd and Zelos, though I will say it felt a bit rushed with the romance. Despite this, definitely an enjoyable read and one that's worthy of being favourited. If you write a sequel for it, I'll read it and prolly squee!

NO! It's not LAME you didn't FAIL! I lurved it! Great detail, for a moment I thought I was going to cry. Sweet, almost gave me a cavity. Poor Lloyd, though. Death by chick.

Anywho... great story, good in character. Really loved it! (I'm repeating myself) Congrats on a great story! :D

Aww! That's so cute! Especially the ending!

You pulled off the emotional Zelos really well. Usually I don't like the fics where he cries, but you managed to write it in a way that makes perfect sense, and isn't completely random. Don't know if I'm making any sense at all, but yeah! I normally wouldn't like Zelos' hair being cut either (it's so pretty!), but with all the explanation you gave, I half felt like picking up those scissors myself.

Awesome job!

that was so amazing! i wish i could write good angst, but it turns out i'm more of a humor person. yes, lloyd, zelos WOULD. ahaha. i love how he got his hair cut. of course, he cant cut it any shorter than that. then he'd look...almost un-girly. oh noes! and i, um, may have said this before, but i really do get excited when i see a new story (especially a new zelloyd story) by you. so keep it up, okay? these oneshots you write...are great, i mean that. they're all totally angsty (yayz!) and IC and great and...yeah, anyway! write more soon, mmkay?

Dammn. I REALLY loved this. It brought tears to my eyes several times, made me laugh out at others...

Beautifully structured, written, and an amazing concept.

Oh Zelos...

This was the only thought that went through my mind as I read this. This is really sad, and the only thing that made me not cry was the fact I was listening to "Happy Together" by The Turtles. Even so, I got a little misty eyed.

You write good angst!