Awesome!

Just came from watching the film. I really hated the ending...it was so sad. Of course, the whole Ripper business is tragic...
But still I wished for something like this...this is now going to be my new headcanon.
Glad Godley helped in the whole deceit- wish there had been a possibility for him to vanish along with his friend.

Thank you for this!

simplemente hermoso
gracias yo también hubiera hecho un final así

Great story! How it should have ended! Wonderful job done!

Cheers, AJ

That was amazing! Very very good. Thanku so nuch for giving poor Abberline and Mary thr best endIng. Johnny Depp was perfect in that movie as u said. This rlly made my day D. Keep up the writing, ur rlly good at it

Love Johnny Depp and this was one of my favorite movies, so to have it have a happy ending awsome! very beleivable, I wish the movie had ended like this.

oh, sweet!

This is a much better ending! I love it!

That would have been a great ending to the film, and believable as well. But at least you wrote this story for us to enjoy. Thanks. :)

aww damn, nice work, That was a nice continuation/ending :D

this was a really great re-edited ending

I wish the movie really ended like this

I'm not logged into my account, so this review is apparently "unverified".

Anyway, YAY! A HAPPY ENDING! I usually don't like horror movies, but I do love Johnny Depp, and I actually liked this movie. Until the end. I was like, "No! Abberline! How could you?"

So, thank you, for this happy ending. It just made my day.

I so agree - this ending would have been brilliant. I like your writing, although you change between past and present tense several times, which interrupts the flow of the story a little. But in all, really lovely. I especially like the fact that you had Abberline undergo several name-changes, and had him wait so long to go to Mary, it was realistic - he'd want to make well and truly sure that he wasn't being followed.

loved it, just how it was meant to be!