Reviews for Initiation Rite
justwildbeat-rhythmemotion chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
I really enjoyed the ficlet
Biblio388 chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
This is great. I like these kind of fics.
b chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
Please more! I adore Dorothy and Winner! they are so lovely!
Hououza chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
Brilliantly done.

Somehow I can just see Dorothy pulling off that one...

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
f U n N i E b O n E s 2K chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
This was absolutely refreshing to come to after a long week! I was felt that this tickled me in the right spots.
c chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
nice 3
kokopelle chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
Oh, this is so brilliant! Thank you very much for writing this. It's THE Dorothy I expect to see if ever she and Quatre will end up as husband and wife (especially in a comic situation). I've read a lot of fics-more than thrice the size of this little ficcie-that 'tried' to portray Dorothy like this, but yours readily dwarfed them all. Brava! Hee, I think I've tried my hand on a predatorily seductive Dorothy once but being the prude (as a writer) that I am, I toned it down 'a bit' until I think none of its few readers ever really got the innuendo in it. It's off the site anyway, after the series where it's in got deleted by some glitch...but needless to say, it is made of fail. It has a someone-please-teach-this-girl-the-birds-and-bees aura in it (hee, but joking aside, no one's really given me the 'talk'). XD

Anyway, this is a very witty piece and I love everything about it (oh, but my favorite is the dedication portion, lol). I arrived home tired from my last night-shift class (yes, my schedule is hell-fourteen hours straight in school-crazy Lyceans) and reading this really made my night. I hope you write more 4xD, as a side pairing in Nonsensical Nuances if not one-shots/ standalone ficlets. And do I need to say that this goes to my favorites? Your pen name goes there too! Yayz and confetti for -readers skyrocketing in numbers! I'm very glad a lot of readers finally found it! Apparently, GW fans have the nose for quality fics (lol! Poor pun on 'nose for news'! And suddenly I thought that Star Trek temporarily loses a very good author).

PS: sorry for the gushing and the abuse of parentheticals. XD
KnighteWolfe chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
hehe, Dorothy Catalonia and Quatre Winner! one of my all time favorite couples in G-Wing. I think that he's teh only one man enough to tame the blonde tigress that Dorothy is.

Kind of like the Solitary Dragon taming the ever-active doctor (or vice versa. I really think Sally wears teh pants in that relationship ;)

Keep up the good work!

I wonder if there's a Sylvia Noventa ficlet coming up from teh Great Mistress Amethyst Une.

KW
Bryony chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
Yowza! Tee hee hee, I like this very much. :)
Chibi Rose Angel chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
Oh my goodness! I LOVED this piece! The way you write Dorothy is hilarious. I think my favorite part was definitely the following: "Really Quatre. The tabloids have it wrong with the assumption that you're the cross dresser in this relationship." When you opened up the fic with Dorothy in the suit, I couldn't help it when my jaw dropped open. For some reason, I had no trouble at all seeing her dressed up as a guy. It just fit for some reason. Then again Dorothy strikes me as the type who can do anything. She doesn't seem like the type to let her gender hinder anything she sets out to do at all. Kudos for writing this piece! I definitely hope you write about Quatre and Dorothy again!
Jb.Santiago chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
Fantastic ficlet! I could definitely see this, also *snort* at them assuming Quatre would be the crossdresser btn them.

Now I need to read your other ficlets!
Cinnamon Selkie chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
*Tsks* Don't you hate it when characters get away from you like that? Still, I enjoyed the result.

This has never been one of my favourite couples, but you make them work for me. Well done. Cinnamon.