This made hardly any sense at all to me, and yet... I'm not sure I want it to. This has a beautiful beauty to it, and yet... this will sound silly... I sort of want to keep it mysterious... Keep writing!

I have always been fond of the theory that Susan actually learned the lesson Aslan wanted to teach in a different way than her siblings did, and used what she learned in Narnia to make our world a better place. Perhaps what her siblings saw as abandoning Narnia was really finding and embracing Aslan by other names. There is a particularly good one-shot fic of this type, the title is something like Stoping to Smell the Roses.

Wonderful as always.

Thank you!

I love how Two Shakes sidles up to Molly and his doggy try at comfort with logic.

So much lost in the Winter. You have made me ponder on the many repercussions from the obliteration of what made Narnia. Hopefully, others who fled before can return some of the knowledge.

It's rare that I enjoy original characters intruding on an established world but you do it with such elan that I find myself longing to know more of Molly's story. She reminds me of Lucy with her full love of Aslan.

Wonder how the rumours of the witch started or if Aslan whispered it to draw Peter to his salvation.

Once again, I love your writing to bits!

Wow. This is so intense.

Two Shakes is such a delightful name and he is so doggy. Orison is perfectly standoffish as a hawk.

Oh Peter, you are so noble, caught in a dishonourable situation but trying to wrest what honour you can.

Andi, your writing is so excellent.

Why did this have to be so short? In two chapters I've completely fallen in love with Molly, impatient and testy yet so compassionate and just so real! And Peter WAS being an idiot but I love him anyway and really, I would have loved to see these two interact a bit more. I absolutely loved this so I'll try to be satisfied with what I've got. And beyond my liking of the characters, I loved the reminder that He is weaving everything together even when we don't see it and we need to trust Him.

What can I say? Another great one by Andi Horton!

Oh, Andi, that was beautiful. Molly has such a wonderful, soothing touch, and you make it so clear that it is because Aslan has taught her, has helped her- she's an amazing OC. And Peter! What a lesson to have learned.

Your writing style is beautiful and your narratives flow so smoothly. God has truly blessed you with a gift for writing, and you really do use it to praise and honour Him!

A beautiful story.

Wow, this is a slightly different tenor to what I'm used to from you. It's so dark, so mysterious and forbidding- and you manage to pull it off masterfully! Poor Peter! ... Hrm. I cannot even write a coherent review. But I'm really enjoying this so far!

Upwards and onwards, as they say!

I really enjoyed what Molly (and Peter) learned in this last part: that things don't always happen in the way you expect, and that what she really loved and yearned for all along wasn't just Narnia, but Aslan.

Poor Peter's confusion at the end made me chuckle. :)

It was also interesting to learn that Molly was a part of your very first Narnia fic-that's so cool that you ended up using her later on for this one. :)

Very beautifully written-thank you for sharing this!

I have not read Worlds in Dream and now plainly must. Maybe sometime when I am not abusing someone else's resources. So, first we have L's passing in Kingdoms and now Molly's here. I regret this for I had come so very much to like her and very much wished to see her return to Narnia. I usually like the sad and unexpected ending, but she was such a refreshingly original and forthright character, that I wished to know more of her. The idea of her being frozen in the water for all that time is very unique and lovely.

Oh, what happened to Rya?

I did laugh ever so hard at Two Shakes' attempts to be a lap dog given my own experiences, previously disclosed to you. I considered it only this morning as my dogs did imitations of Two Shakes and tried creeping up on me at 5 Am pretending as you say to be much smaller than they are though they, like Two Shakes, are very large indeed.

I am glad that she was able to thoroughly scold and even tease Peter before passing on. He really was such an idiot.

It is a pleasure, though a bittersweet one, to see such wonderful and abundant work from you.

I love how you weaved this story with the scene in your one, 'World in Dreams.' The ending here begged for more, and so it was nice to see you had already written what happened next.

I grew to like Molly through this chapter. It was sad to see her go with Aslan at the end though it was understandable. I think had she made the decision to stay, it would have been very beneficial to Narnia as well, for who else could have taught about the different uses of Lion's Breath (which reminded me a lot of athelas in LoTR) now?

Wow, great chapter and great story! I love how you took a song and gave it life. Very well done.

This is written extremely well! It all flows together beautifully. I anxiously anticipate more!

Ooh, so excellent. I have no complaints, only awe at your descriptiveness and strong characterization. Good job dear!