I don't know whether anyone else has spoken to you about this but you use a lot of exclamination marks (!) which happen to be a pet peeve of mine. I'm sure I would enjoy it a lot more if the characters didn't constantly speak with exclamanot

Great chapter

oh man you also didn't finish this, but i understand life gets you! but i hope one day you're gonna come back, find some new inspiration and hopefully finish your stories either are great!

Yay! they finally came out

yey! revealing themselves to the whole upper east side? wow! that was great. and chuck should really go to hell. LOL

hope you update soon.. i really follow this story :)

hey! I'm glad you're back

Update this is so interesting I love the way they areso in love with each other

Really good. They should come out

their toilet scene was rly hot! hoping ull update soon ;)

:D

really good, I love this couple.

hey! ive just found ur story and i really like it. unfortunately i couldnt read it all, coz its getting pretty late here and tmrw i have to wake up early. im just dropping by to tell u i like ur style and s&b r rly sweet together. i just noticed one thing that u might wanna improve. u r putting too many comas and it might be better if u would just have a bit shorter sentences w/o listing so much.
anyway, im looking forward to reading the rest of the story ;)

yay! the long awaited chapter! i thought it was god :) waiting on the nexr chapter keep up the good work!

When are you going to update? ):

This is my favorite story & you can't just ditch it where you left off ):

I'm really looking up for your update! Your doing great with this fic

Bye