Im sad that I discovered this story a little too late :( hopefully you’ll update!

Can't stop laughing! Brilliant. This is a great story and funny concept. Relationship development between Colby and Seth is great too. Poor Seth imprinting on a student. I really look forward to see how you develop their relationship. I bet things get complicated as a romantic feelings develop:) Can't wait to read the next update! Glad I stumbled upon this golden piece of Seth fanfiction!

Amazing story! Blew through all five chapters way too quickly. I love the humor and wit. And the relationship growth. I am so intrigued to read this story as it develops. You’re doing an excellent job. I am also really growing to like Coly’s character. And Seth is hilarious. Well done!

I think photography would be fitting for Renesmee. Keep writing. Even if you take awhile to update, I’ll be here to read and review when that time comes :)

Hello,

I really like this story. It is funny and not too much emotional. And the background change from most of the stories!

Thank you for this story, I can't wait to see the next chapter!

Bisous
Dorisse

This is probably one of the most well developed OC stories I’ve read in a while. Colby is not a Mary Sue character (thankfully). She’s snarky and flawed but overall a likable character. Your take on Seth embodies the series’ quirky and happy persona while taking into consideration the time jump. His relationship with Jacob and use of the word “frack” was perfect. I can’t wait until you update! :)

Wow, love this! Can't wait for more!

Love it! Hard to find twilight stories that have real characters in them, so this is great! Hope to read more:)

love Seth-Rose dynamic

This story is very interesting, and I’m really hoping to read mote if it

Oh, wow! I loved everything about this story thus far! Every chapter had me laughing, some even brought me to laughter tears! Your style of writing and your characters are amazing and so refreshly unique. I love the Rose/Seth relationship and I'm looking forward to reading more on them- "reluctant friends" was a great phrase. I am curious to see how Seth reacts to Colby if she and Liam get back together. I also hope that during her assignment with Nessie; they become friends. I'm curious to read how Colby will react when she sees Seth next and of what she thinks about him living so close to the Cullen's. I'm also anxious to read when Seth meets Colby's parents again. Please update soon! I love your OC and her sarcastic wit.

-Cynthia

Poor seth, his life sucks right now...I love this story and I really can't wait for more to read; I really want to see how Colby reacts to the face that Seth is really close with the 'clones', as she called them or the fact that. He practically lives with them.:) Well, can't wait for more!

This is soooo good hope u update again sometime soon

this story is very entertaining and it's very funny, i love the way colby and seth are drawn to each other and how they're having fantacys about each other, it's amazing

Hm, I have to say I probably preferred the first ending. I can't really explain why though, sorry. I'm gutted there isn't more to this story because I like the characters and it's well written. I could imagine it developing into a really interesting story as well. If you're planning on finishing it, I'd love to know so I can add it to my follow's list