Reviews for Flashbacks
Tenten26 chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
Haha, your wish is my command. I enjoy giving reviews.

Pretty cheesy, but it was so cute! I love your fics. I'm reading them right now.
Sakura Keiko chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
Hihi. XD I felt glad to see your name there when I was looking for ancient RukaRus. XD Let's see the difference between your writing style before and your writing style now. :D

'those babbling, brunette, best friend of mine.' Shouldn't it be the babbles/babblings (?) of that brunette, best friend of mine? Or something like that.

'How could I have ever forgotten my spare toolbox under my desk? This was a first time, and now I had to suffer the half-kilometer walk from the School Dormitory.' Hotaru's in middle school here, right? So that just shows that everyone has had some piece of childishness in them, even the Ice Queen. :)

'I hate being caught in surprise!' Oooh~ Hotaru's little secret. :D

'Almost impossible to hear if it hadn't because of the silence.' Umm..I think the "hadn't because of the silence" part should be changed. Somehow. XDD

"Hi. Did I surprise you?" HI, RUKAAAA~ If I was Hotaru, I would have hugged him. XDDD But that wouldn't be Hotaru-like, so I shall rephrase the sentence-If I was in Hotaru's position, I would definitely have hugged him.

" –or to hide. ." From fangirls, perhaps?

He sighed. "Fan girls..." OH MY GOSH. I MUST BE PSYCHIC OR SOMETHING. Either that or it's just REALLY REALLY obvious. I'm guessing it's the latter. T-T

'Yeah. It was a war against fan girls.' OOOH~ I COULD SEE IT RIGHT NOW! IN NEW YORK TIMES-OR RATHER, IN NEW ALICE TIMES-"Fangirls Starts War Against Hotaru Imau. Who will leave Victorious?" XDD

"You used PAINTBALLS?" OH MY GOSH. THIS MUST BE THE MOST EPIC LINE IN ALL OF THE EPICNESS.(Did that make sense? By the way, this story seems familiar...)

'I disgust them, not only for loving Ruka...' HEEHEE. You're just jealous, Hotaru. :))))

'Of course I wasn't jealous! They were mere fan girls compared to me, for crying out loud!' YES, HOTARU! You are superior to fan girls, for you are awesome! (Oh wait. I'm a fangirl too...)

"THAT IS PREPOSTEROUS.." Hmm...Maybe I should start banging my head to guys who annoy me to. 8D

'And to my greatest surprise, HER NAME WAS ON IT!' . I might just do that someday. On a chair. So when somebody says, "Hey! That's not YOUR chair! You dop't have your name on it!" I can retort with "Um, excuse me, but I DO." Hehehehehe XDD

'Mere attraction. That's all.' The first time I read this, I read 'MORE attraction' HAHAHAHAHAHAAH. Yeah, I have this myopia thing. And I need to wear glasses, but I don't want to at the moment, so, um, that happens a lot. But maybe it wasn't a coincidence. Maybe I was really meant to read it that way. Maybe-I should do on with the review, shouldn't I?

"It goes with it in a one meter radius." Awesome! How does she do it? :D

' I witnessed her transition from a small, cute, and annoying little girl to a beautiful, intelligent, intimidating – still annoying – well, lady.' Yup. I have definitely read this before.

"You love..Natsume?" . AHAHAHA... This reminds me of the time I used to read NatsumeXRuka fics. XDD

'One word only came from my mouth that night – "Oh." – and I just held his hand.' THAT'S SO UNROMANTIC! I WON'T HEAR OF IT! It would be better with Ruka, a boquet of irises in his arms, begging Hotaru to go on a date with him. Then Ruka would give her the flowers, whilst blushing furiously, and tell her how he loves her (AWWW!) and then they would go to Central Town on a horse. YAAAAY. Oh wait. This is Your story. I'MSORRYI'MSORRYI'MSORRY.

"If I leave, I'll come back to you alive." Oh yes. I have definitely read this before. Maybe it was at the time I had no account and didn't know I could review anonymously.

' I would gladly be doing flashbacks.' If someone says this line is not perfect and perfectly enthralling, I shall hit them with a box.

I loved it. The plot was perfect. The grammar needs a little editing. Just a little more and it would have been perfect. My first RukaRu was a fail. It was mere fluff, with grammar errors floating everywhere. I salute you. YAAY
iza chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
awesome so cute nee hehehehe!:)
DreamingReverie chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
FLASHBACKS... :)
foxtrotelly chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Aww, that seemed cheesy but realistic as well. Kudos to another successful funnysweet RukaXHotaru that didn't seem wrong to me. XD
Nils chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
Wow! So cute! The last part was especially romantic! Good job!
proserandom chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
this story is just damn sweet! XD