Naruto
Is
A
SAVAGE!

i wish naruto to be with that blue hair chick

This looks interesting but it has been 10 years since it was updated

I decided to give this another try and I have to say that, it was a pretty good story so far. Glad I took it up again and ignored some feelings I had about it. Thanks!

thank god that you clarified the full name I thought it was rin noharA

Not to mention Nagato is also Uzumaki

It is Nohara Rin Nohara

I know it's been a while since you updated, but if by chance you ever come back to this story, know that your plot and OCs are very good but your delivery needs a lot of work. You don't need to have consistently long or short chapters, but the shear bulk of your A/Ns could make at least two to three chapters by themselves. When writing fanfics always assume that the general population of your readers know who and what you're talking about unless it's something that you clearly made up in which an A/N is needed. However, if you can explain in story instead of A/N that's even better. If a chapter is 3000 words and 1000 of those is dedicated to A/N, I personally think you should go back and think about the flow and telling of your story.

I really like the base of the story, but some of the writing and the overall structure makes it both a tedious and lackluster read. Thank you for writing anyways.

Cut down on your author notes, they're long

To be fair, written education is still really important for a ninja, and there's all sorts of non-combat related things to learn.

Recognizing safe or poisonous plants, learning to make and recognize simple poisons, trapmaking, trap-avoiding, learning geology, travel distances, getting an understanding of the recent political history of the major nations, a minor amount of teaching in various knowledges and skills that a civilian would need for authenticity for even a minor infiltration role, math for the handling of money on the job or in their personal finances, knowledge of the skills to maintain a household (even if only pretending to live there), recognition of cyphers and codes, learning cultural cues that might imply that someone is actually from another nation, makeup work and other disguises, mundane field healing...

Another shitty fanfic. Cya. Same bullshit as every other naruto fan made story. Include the bland atmosphere the story gives.

Hey dude, I know this is really old and you have abandoned this fic by now, but if you simply forgot about it, I would greatly appreciate it if you were to continue it, as it is written well.
-5IL

Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it only nine chapters into the story

Ok I had a good laugh at the whole, no yaoi because Naruto isn't gay, but I'm thinking of changing a male characters sex so they can fuck

This story was a boring piece of shit ruined by OCs and the writer's own insistence on over-complicating things to the point of idiocy. It's a good thing this was abandoned.