Excelente relato, he llegado un poco tarde al mundo de el mentalista pero me estoy devorando cada historia ️

Of course it would. Great start by the way.

Oh so sweet thanks for a very good read I think is will be a favourite as you sort of finished it and not leave it on a cliff hanger I hate those thanks again

I have no words for this story. And you are an extremely talented writer

Wow... this story was awesome! Made me sigh, cry, and squeal. :D I really like how you portrayed their struggle through emotions, memories and traumata. Keep on writing, you're great at it! :)

This is probably my favourite multi chapter, if not any type of fic at all. So good. I nearly cried about 20 times and everything about this was perfect. Thank you!

this is so deep and soulful. i love it. would you do this Kind of au with the other seasons as well? i would totally read that!

Poignant. More meaningful than had they another round of sex. Interesting than Jane would consciously recognize how much more (and better) his life was becoming because of Lisbon. Interesting to think he was already contemplating an "after" Red John so early in the series, though I would think he'd be quite conflicted about that. Enjoying reading this.

fantastic story!

An epic end to this story is right! Beautiful story and beautiful way to t end it. Great job, Rina! :)

I had to kind of let out a laugh when reading a 5 year old Lisbon sticking a fish in her pocket! LOL! Great chapter as always:)

I loved the spin you did with this episode and scene! :)

AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!:) I loved how you wrote their first kiss:)

Laughing out loud at your authors note! LOL. This was a great chapter as always! Great job. :)

Yet another great chapter. I just love them. You write them so well! :)