wow, amazing story. Even though the show's outcome was different, this is what I would have liked to have seen. glad I found this.

Amazing story! Even though it didn't follow canon, it truly reflected everyone's personalities. Looking forward to your continued writings.

Wonderful end and even more wonderful story. I love the way you described the thoughts and feelings of each of them. Perfect.

I can say without doubt that this is one of my favorite stories ever.

Great chapter. I hope Hotch can find some kind of comfort in that letter.

I'm so glad you brought Sean back. It seems that the show's producers and many fic writers have forgotten that Hotch has a brother. Sweet chapter.

Beautiful chapter.

I love stories that show how Jack thinks of his father as a superhero you wrote it great.

Simply beautiful chapter.

Love it!

I'm glad you mentioned Morgan's discomfort with hospitals and his father, a nice touch.

I really like that you brought Gideon back, I would have liked a mention of him in the show with everything that happened with Foyet. Great chapter.

Great chapter. I really liked how you wrote to Prentiss here.

I loved this chapter and how you wrote Haley, I really liked her (though I don't agree with her leaving Hotch) and I always thought that she still loved and cared about Hotch.

I liked the part about the two neighbors, sweet.

I love Hotch/Dave friendship and this chapter was just wonderful. I really liked the mencion of how Jack loves his father.

Great and interesting chapter.

Great chapter.

There is a part of me that wish that something like this had happened in the show. The team catching Foyet, Haley alive *sigh* although the 5x09 is my favorite episode so...

I'm glad you wrote Elle's visit. I like her the time she remained in the show, but I don't like the way she was blaming Hotch. This seems a good way of reconciliation.