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![]() ![]() Continue a good story if you can make a lot and make pairing minako / sailor venus, Please do not stay long |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait. Walking the path of heaven? Kamen Rider Kabuto. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so when will this be updated? You say this is being rewritten so when will the rewrite be up? its been 3 years since the last update and your author's note. I really wish to see what will happen next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're doing a rewrite...but it's been two years...WHAT'S UP WITH THAT? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you are not abandonning this. It's a great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. What's going to happen when Naruto meets Yugito? |
![]() ![]() ![]() O_O narutos thoughts is The seal are pretty deep. |
![]() ![]() You're right, does need work. Mainly in the interactions and bonding occurred too swiftly and with so many infodumps. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great. This thing needed a major rewrite. Nice idea, horrible follow through. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What is the rewrite called? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, it's good to know you're rewriting. Some characterization would be good for the fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you just retyping the chapters or are you putting them in a new story altogether? |
![]() ![]() you do relize that i now hate you for the a/n in you last chapter now right? nah im kidding just update again when you can though sooner would be nice its not often that a good crossover fic is made with what i would call a slightly minor xover-type like S/M and naruto so keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() Look it seems like u haven't updated this story in a while so would you mind? I mean it is a good story so plz consider it |