Reviews for Yet again, with a little extra help |
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![]() ![]() You know i have no fucking clue how anyone likes this. It isn't remotely naruto it is GOD like ocs that think they are funny. Thats it. Horrible humor and the beginning makes no sense. So naruto gets sent back in time first thing we need to do fucking prank people. REALLY how does that make sense like at all? Wanted to try a longer fanfic and tried to read this highly recommend people skip if they actually want a naruto fic. |
![]() ![]() Creating incubators is worse than fangirls. Scab is now officially no longer my fav oc. |
![]() ![]() Hmmm, sinister playing up these sinister sisters. Also, nice combat, truly. As for madara bI well... |
![]() ![]() You decided to split the sanbi like the kyubi was split, even giving only the kyubi has enough power for that, and. Kept the fillers Chakra explanation... Äh well, could work... L |
![]() ![]() And 9 years and a full TV series later, one more book will come out soon ish. Hahaha... |
![]() ![]() ![]() that last comment about neji... oof |
![]() ![]() Honestly, if one checked and corrected all the strange grammar and often obtuse wording this might be a great crossover story, and Instead. Of only a good one. |
![]() ![]() Your sister sounds like a sister to have. Gz. Also, ok xlchapter. A bit too much namedropping and oh so cool it's tough stuff. But otherwise good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am having an ABSOLUTE BLAST reading this, my god |
![]() ![]() If you just had somebody to. Check. Your poetry, cause. Let me tell you it has neither rhyme nor grammar down pat... Sadly... |
![]() ![]() Ah, New Vegas. If it had less. Awful graphics,. Slightly better controls and some more addons, all the fallout anyone would ever need. |
![]() ![]() One doesn't need up and stuff if one is truly eternal. So yeah, nicely minmaxxed. |
![]() ![]() Sigh... I am always saddened again when I am reminded Monty oum is dead. He had real talent... |
![]() ![]() Sadly, Sasuke lacks the sense of style Sith have. I mean that hair? That kimono? Give me black. Robes and armor please. |
![]() ![]() Haven't read this story for a couple of years, it's still as awesome as I remember it! I do hope you plan on finishing the sequel though, this story is too good not to finish completely! |