Definitely enjoyed this 'same but different' take on series one.

I don't usually review untill the end of a fic if I'm reading the entirety but I just wanted to say that this is one of the best post fairies janto scenes I've read in ages, and that I'm loving the fic so far.

Deeta, your stories are well thought-out and well-written. a few suggestions:

1) find a way to mark transitions in time/place so that the reader doesn't got from three paragraphs in Cardiff to one in London with no signal.

2) "shuddering," not "juddering," and I have no idea what you mean by someone "sloping" by - little things that a beta should catch

3) I love the introspections- you get the "voice" right on!

This was a really great story, quite fantastic :)

This story was brilliant. I loved every moment of it. I saw that there is a sequel of sorts, Tears in the Rain, covering the year that never was...is there going to be a fic covering season 2 of TW as well? I do hope there is. I thought your writing was amazing, the plot was fabulous (all the "extra" bits added to the cannon), I could not stop until I reached the end. Please please please keep writing! :)

Okay I have been reading this story and I don't think I have yet to review... I'm up to chapter 14 and have loved every one so far... It's like watching a series except I get to read about it... or going back stage and getting to know the characters better... great job and thanks for sharing

What a well written brilliant story! I was told to look up your stuff by one of the other authors from the torchwood part of this site and how right she was!

This story is like filling in the blanks from the show, the little scenes that they cut, for lack of time or what ever reason. I've loved reading this.

Thank you!

Love this, it is a refreshing look at series 1.

Great converation. Love the distance they've covered together.

Gx

Fantastic. Love the progression and the heling process that's starting

Gx

This was really good, enjoyed reading it.

OH! I loved it! thanks for sharing this with all of us! of course this deserves a sequel and the opportunity to reach 100 stories! Looking forwad for more )

I really like your story! It takes the edge of COE. Will you do the season 2? I would like to read it.

Thanks for a wonderful piece of work! I guess every story has to end sometime, though this one left me kinda hanging...well, I hope you consider doing a sequel and continue to expand on the J &I relationship which you started with so much potential in it...

Thanks a mil again!

very good I enjoyed it alot! thank you for sharing your wonderful talents with us for this story it's been great!