This was such an awesome fix and def one of my all time favorites! It’s hard to find a movie verse doc that writes the characters (especially RemyRogue) with an adult perspective. They usually come out sounding like teenagers. You captured both their essences and transformed the comics into a legitimate movie verse plot. Thank you so much for sharing! 3

Is it bad that half way through this chapter I was really hoping that the only reason bobby was bought and is in a room full of ice is cos this little girl is addicted to ice cream and needed a walk in freezer with a friend?

This story was great. I loved how you displayed Remy's struggle with his feelings for Rogue and his loyalty to Bobby. I love Remy because he isn't as terrible as people suspect he is. This was an interesting plot point.

I have to admit I'm relieved Rogue and Remy didn't fully cheat. I'm glad that they managed to not cross that line. I already read a story where they did, and well that's pretty common. I'm glad to read a story where that doesn't happen.

I loved how you developed the story and how Bobby in the end realized Rogue wasn't for him.

I liked how you ended it although I did want more :)

The happy ending is a little "too happy" if you get what I mean. Just my opinion though

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wonderful :)

I can't handle the feels at this ending.
This was so addictively good!
I read it all in one sitting.
Omg.

Oh wonderful! Maybe it was he fact that I was listening to some classic Bluegrass while I was reading this but the mood of the relationships you established was perfect! Even Logan's relationship with Rouge, which wasn't given a lot of time to be established, shone through perfectly. The Remy you portrayed who is starved for genuine friendship and a place to call home despite his past as a womanizing wanderer was a fantastic walking contradiction. Rouge may have been a bit clingy in parts, but then again it is in her nature when she is emotionally torn to be so. Storm's quiet furry was perfect as well in her interrogation scene! All in all, I had a fabulous time reading this story and exploring the world you were able to paint!

sofi

This is just so perfect. So perfect. My eyes are watering, don't cry.
Wow. What an amazing little journey you've taken me on. Wow. I'm still very much amazed at this.

interesting story to read

Awww. so nice. I love Remy and Marie. Hope you write more Remy and Marie stories.

More, please, give more!

I also a southern girl, we have beach here and all :D

Wow, just wow! I cant to read the Chapter 2 *-*

Aw ! That last line is fantastic.

Hey you can see a scan of the comic this EPIC scene is from on
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About three posts down.
You ROCK btw
Keep being awesome