...Why the hell is everything aside from the dialogue is in italacs?! Why can't you make all of them non-italacs and then only use it when the character is thinking?

I thought of some nicknames for Kotetsu and Izume. They are Gate and Key.

Great Job!

Cool story and an interesting idea. I'm looking forward to reading more. Is the 'he' the Raikage referring to Jiraiya? How are they going to find Jiraiya?

Twitch...twitch...twitch...eyeeeettwitch. C-cliff h-han-ger! Twitch...*giggles*...eyeee-t-twitch...*whimpers*no-o not-t a-a c-cli-ff-ff han-ger-er. No-o! *sobs* Must read more! MUST READ MOOOOORRREEE! YOSH, THE FLAMES OF YOUTH BURN BRIGHTLY IN THIS FANFICTION, AND SUCH YOUTHFUL FLAMES SHOULDN'T BURN OUT! YOSH! *Does good guy pose*

I love this story!

I love this story, dattbayo! It's so cool!

Looking forward to more. :) the Tora hunt had me in stitches. :P

Hey just wanted to fix my earlier statement your grammar in the the beginning chapters needs work. The later ones are pretty much fine . Seeya

Something I want to bring to your notice that while not big issue is that there are small holes in your grammar. Otherwise good job

awww poor little naruto he has to deal with little kids hahahaha

I love greetings

I hope history

continue reading that

me singing and I stayed in

know who is bitten by

*Llama Darky glomp* :D you're alive! i was just getting ready to PM you two and make sure you both were ok and were only buried in college and not say.. hit by a car ;) Anyway i would have reveiwed earlier but i thought i already had and just now i was reading a reccomendation list for naruto fics and thought to myself " hmm.. wonder when Comedy Fox'll be updated..?" then i had a moment where i was like "... wait.. i did review that riight?... CRAP!" and now here i am .

Anyway about the chapter; I did enjoy it a lot as always and found the story about Naruto learning Anbu interesting and slghtly funny but i feel like the story is loosing some of it's original.. flare.. in the beginning we saw quite a few social interactions and really got to know Comedy Fox the character however in these past 2 chapters it's been a little like a really good filler that you know is important to the story but at the same time you want to hurry up so you can go back to the main story. :) (maybe cut back on flashbacks for a chapter or two then come back to it?) The first "Mask Beginnings Act " was in my opinion definately the best partially just because it kept a 'storytelling' feel to the Naruto which helped me as a reader to remember the previous chapters and put all of it into context. This is all just my opinion of course but i hope it''s helpful to you in some way :)

Lastly i hope to hear from you soon and i really hope the hands stop hurting you Macho Llamas :( Also hopoe the school work is going well and Happy belated Thanksgiving :D!

Good story. However the nicknames don't work. It's fine to have 1 or 2 but the amount in this story is excessive.

O_O

Now I'm all embarassed. . . you thought Dominoes was good? Not that I don't appreciate your review, because I reallyyy do!

See, I wrote it awhile ago... I believe I was 12. But, because I'm not that funny, and school-work is such a large burden, I haven't finished it. I'm 13 now... so, it's probably a little under a year old! -laughs nervously- Um, anyway, I'm really glad you liked the 1st chapter, but trust me- Once Mystee takes over, you'll like it A LOT more.

(It was such a slow start!)

But, I'm very honored because -from what I've read, this being the only story so far- you write so well! :)