really like this fic! I'm a fan of Iori :)

You did a great job on this fic, it really reminds me of a twist that takes place much later in the manga. You wrote Ichitaka's thoughts really well, it's all very believably done.

I liked this... It was a little different. I own that manga and I could see this happening if they didn't leave or if he got there earlier.

not bad, 1st i really like the manga so props there for that and 2nd you have potential really... im in a writer's club and what you wrote was almost right up there with the best in the club. that said, i just have to flame a little. dont worry im not a jerk like some people but team i"s was put into action after that incedent. I think...

Enjoyed it, because I am a HUGE I''s fan! Not sure why I loved it so much, but I absolutely loved all the characters, and wish they would make a sequal.

OMG THIS IS A REALLY KEWL THING, UR GOOD,

e.e I LOVE IT! o.o I never thought about how Ichitaka was that in love with Iori...

very nice . i am happy see a write that is of this manga! thank you so much for write something as well! very very good! i love it-chan so much :3 he is my love all of life XD

what the heck is I"s

good to finally see another fan of this series :) my only problem with it is that ichitaka is a tiny bit out of character. got over his self-destructive nature a little too easily and early. i don't mean to say he had to yell at her because it's something he would do, but i'm sure you get the gist of what i'm saying. please continue :) i can guarantee i'll be reading it

Nice episode, Wandering Fantasies. In the manga the events of chapter 1 were pretty much shown to be a watershed moment, as witnessed in the penultimate chapter, where Ichitaka dreams of being back in high school when he's in a coma. In the manga, even after this incident things seemed to be developing between the two, but then Itsuki's appearance threw a spammer into the works.

This time, events may proceed mostly the same after this as in canon (Itsuki showing up, Izumi and Aiko showing up, Samejima/Marionette King's plots against Iori, the Isai talent agency etc.), but with the critical difference being the state of Ichitaka and Iori's relationship. With them already being boyfriend and girlfriend about one and a half years earlier than in the manga, there are bound to be all sorts of butterflies. For one thing, Ichitaka may this time have the courage to tell Isai and Iori's manager to get lost when they tell him to break up with Iori.

Only thing that I found lacking here was Teratani's absence in this, since he also witnessed the whole incident. A comment or two from him would've been nice, but that's just a minor quibble. All in all this was well done, and I hope you write more. There can never be too many I"s fanfics. Indeed, this is only the second I"s fic I've actually found here in .