This is excellent! Really interesting!

Gah! I looooooove this! Seriously I think this just came to be one of my top favorites! I have never read anything like this! Its sooooo well written and easy to understand! And its sweet and almost real like? Love it! XD

I like this! Ur writing style is interesting. Kind of confusing sometimes but definitely entertaining. If you can add more emotion sometimes (even though we know how simple minded Naruto can be) then it would be stellar.

...Lol. Stellar. Funny word.

Anyways, great job!

i 3 this story~ X3

LOL!

I really love this! I love the style of writing you used! Reading Naruto's thoughts was hilarious!

i dont know why, but i think this story is so amazing. great job!

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Ok the line "Wonder how long it’ll take before one of us gets arrested for manslaughter.",

was hilarious! :) Very cute story and funny. I'd have to say I've never read a story before with just the person's thoughts. It was very good the way you did it.

Very awesome story

OMG

AWESOME

I laughed the whole time XD

I got a lil' bit confused cos it was like listening to half a conversation but it was awesome! Naruto was a bit ooc but the originality more that made up for it! P

I really enjoyed reading that and i found it very interesting 2 read from just Naruto POV . I liked the way you didn't need 2 know what Sasuke was saying at times you could just tell by what Naruto was thinking. Great Work!

This was kinda confusing...

Wow.

I LOVED this. Perfect.

And even though it was from Naruto's pov and onlye his thoughts, Sasuke's influence was detectable even though we didn't really hear him or see what he was doing.

This is a really unique way of writing. I enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing.