This should have happened in the movie.

this should have been in the movie.

Oh Ironhide 3:

A very nice story, good touch x

i dont know what to say it is all really moving and gut wrenching ain that anyone could feel you have a talent its amazing - i doubt that the screenwriters could come u with this

You did good work with this fic It annoyed me in the movie that they all but ignored what Optimus' death would have done to the other members of his team. Thank you for covering off that omission .

You show the emotions and personality of Ratchet and Ironhide well.

That was wonderful character building between those two! Excellent job!

~VLS~

wow love it thanks for a really cool and believeable story you kept them in their personalities really well