Reviews for Beauty Pageants |
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Orihime-18 chapter 16 . 7/6 Halaha laughing on the negotiation..great story :) |
Orihime-18 chapter 1 . 7/5 Wow I guess this is gonna be a great story..I always liked ichihime story when it wil show their connection even at a young age just like in the anime where they first meet when they’re 10 if I’m not mistaken hehe when hime is carrying sora to the clinic and it was ichi who open it and so that time they already met,,just like on this story and that ichi was already protecting (somewhat hehe) and being their for her..so this story really captivated me hehehe..this is gonna be great |
Aquavit chapter 16 . 9/1/2017 I really enjoyed reading your story. The pageant world you painted is believable and the everyone is in character. I especially love the epilogue where Ichigo and Orihime are happily married with three children and another planned one in the future. |
Deez Nuts chapter 8 . 4/5/2017 I could tell all the effort and time into making this the best possible in fact I was surprised that you had created 15 dang chapters and it was interesting nonetheless. |
3 chapter 16 . 12/28/2016 WHY IS KARIN WITH HITSUGAYA AND WHY SO MANY SEX REFERENCES WHORE |
crista2311 chapter 16 . 5/28/2016 Beautiful story...too many emotions...loved every chapter and the epilogue AMAZING! |
Guest chapter 16 . 5/29/2015 Wow this story is so sweet and fluffy (except for the part were she meet her mom again ...oh and the parts when Aizen came ...I Hate him) |
Guest chapter 6 . 8/15/2014 Um, what should I say overall? You definitely have talent and your writing is in the process of becoming mature. However, I do think you have difficulty capturing the character's character, so it was slightly disappointing for me in that prospect. Also, you make things happen too fast. Its good to drag it out for two chapters and a half, then you can bring in the problem. Character development is definitely one of your talents, but it can be improved. Overall, great work. You're almost there. Keep it up. |
kiki chapter 16 . 4/25/2014 best adorable story ever |
nlinz chapter 16 . 2/17/2014 THIS STORY WAS PERFECTION I LOVED THE EPILOGUE!.BEAUTIFUL! |
Guest chapter 16 . 10/27/2013 fuck this fucking fanfiction |
InsomniaWaffle chapter 5 . 11/25/2012 y u make ichigo rude?! I want to smack him for being a bastard to orihime. |
Ermilus chapter 16 . 7/16/2012 Great story |
Pisces00 chapter 16 . 5/8/2012 A happy ending. Too bad her mom is still a horrible person. I stayed up all night reading this fic. It's good by the way. |
sunflowerspot chapter 16 . 4/29/2012 Really great story. I had a lot of fun reading it and you did a great job! _ |