I love how he doesn't imprint thank you great story.

Aww such a cute fic! :)

Yay I HATE JACOB WITH A BURNING PASSION

Really good so far.

Good story

Good job.

Great intro! Very excited to read your story.

Nickname for reneesmae could be Nessie

JB is too much of an idiot to be taken seriously as a 'villian'.

Everything that came out his mouth seemed childish and idiotic.

No complexity at all.

Anything with JB always comes across as childish... I had a problem with writing it that way myself. So I can't say too much against what was written here.

YOu had me a t JB will not imprint. LOLOLOL. Good I hate that plot. Forget the fact that she was a baby, It was soo stupid and made NO DAMN SENSE AT ALL. To me, that was SM's blatant attempt at giving the JB team 'something'. But how fair was that to Edward or the rest of the overly passive cullens. Now what? They will have to live with that smell the rest of thier days just because of that?

Good Lawd that pissed me off.

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Man that back and forth in Edwards mind was the worse ever. Gawd, he is such an idiot! Why does he
love to over complicate things. So frustrating. I don't know why anyone thinks he is brillant. Pfft.
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This may not have imprinting (thank the lord) but I pray it is not a fluff fest. Please dear gawd, say it aint so.

Thank you for wrapping this story up. I did enjoy reading it. Cheers

That was just wonderful. I think Jerkob isn't getting the outcome he wanted.

Loved this chapter. Good to hear from Charlie.

Good chapter.