Oh, that was delightful! thank you!

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Awww this was a sweet if sad story. But I really enjoyed it! Well done!

Naw. So sweet.

Aw...that was sweet. Great job on this one...pulled on my heartstrings...

[disgusting sobbing sounds]

I started crying unconditionally after I read the last line.

The way they still loved each other no matter what the circumstances are and their hidden messages... *swoons*

Just beautiful. Simply beautiful

nice

cute!

So, wait, is Barricade dead or not?

I'm hoping not! Please continue this! 'cause, OMG, I love 'Cade! He's, quite possibly, my favorite 'Con! And I was thinking, at first, that Prowl was the Creator. BUT OMG THIS IS AMAZING!

Please continue!

aw if possible continue this please its a great story and i think that it could g ofuther than a one-shot ... if Barricade ain't dead ... XD i love Barricade he's col XD ... haha so please continue or i kill you XD IM NOT CRAZY

Great story! A really nice insight into a possible creator/sparkling. It's going to be interesting to see how you show this relationship in future chapters, being that they are on oposite sides.

that was very good. Usually it's the other way around-Prowl is the Dad and Barricade is the son. Could you post more?

Aw! Very touching! It gives another output about Barricade.