That was fucking amazing, #bestsmutwriter this THIRTEEN yr old lil girl loved you're fanfic! PLEASE MAKE MOREEEEE

Lol I’m 12 but it was a dare from my friend to read it she’s also 12

This was amazing if I tried to write something like this I know it would be horrible but this was one of the best ive ever read

Q: Was it a wrong choice to read this?
A: No, it wasn't.

Q: Did I have a nosebleed?
A: HELLA YEAH! If I would be anime character then I would have so big nosebleed that I would die of blood loss.

OMG... Well no doubt, Asuma's a mountain of a man...

This was waaaay hot... *currently melting in my chair*

Okey this is embarrassing but I've never been more turned on in my life! But considering all that forplay I'm not surprised. The was hawt. The only thing that came close is yoai harem.

Lol I'm 12

Damn that was some cool sex '-'

Dame right im not 18 but its my friends fault I like yaoi now so dont go blaming it on me. But other that that awesome cant find my that satisfying anymore! Hope you keep up the good work and I also have already read your other fanfic!

That was great! The first time I read this I forgot to review, so here I am again reviewing. That wad an amazing fic. Good job!

second time reading this. I read it more throughly and my mind is blown. this. was. amazing. I can just IMAGINE it so clearly! GOD! it's just a Masterpiece.

You know... I read this a few years ago and ever since this isat least in my opinion) the definition of well written smut!

It's August 21th, official Fanfic Writer Appreciation Day, so I came here just to leave a review. Maybe I have in the past, I don't remember... I read this story 3-4 years ago and it left a huge impression on me. It kind of became my etalon of well-written fanfiction and stayed on my mind for literal years as guidance. Thank you for writing it, I just needed to get this out there.

I'M UNDER 18... TOO. I am very.. happy.

I'M SORRY I'M UNDER 18! IT WAS TOO GOOD TO RESIST!
Some minor spelling issues, but nothing major. The biggest thing that caught my eye, mistake wise, of course something else occupied my thoughts other than errors ;) , was that Kakashi's mask is actually blue, not black. That mistake is towards the mid-beginning when he started eating. This is the best writing style I've read since Cirque du Freak, but that's just personal preference. Do you write bondage? And submission? Cause I'm REALLY in the mood for some kinky KisamixItachi. Loved the story and love the writing style! Keep it up, author-chan!