Things seem to be going pretty smoothly for Naruto; although isn't it a little fast for him? Wouldn't it have taken longer than that for him and the others to establish some form of trust with each other? Anyway; it's pretty good. The plot seems to be okay too.

Whoa; poor Naruto

Pretty good start you've got here

i love the way you started this, still laughing, hold nothing back and keep it real, i actually skipped the whole thing just to comment on that alone before i read on and forgot it.

i like how you point out the wierd little things here and there, makes me laugh man, makes me laugh, you write in a manner that makes me think you have exactly the kind of personality id love to hang out with. keep it up man. Is awesome.

Good Story

Why u no update

That was a great chapter, well it depends what you like, but the emotional manipulation was huge! At least for me anyways. Naruto as a child was the big one for me, it was enough to bring tears to my eyes. I enjoyed this chapter greatly.

Unity for better writing.

it sounds pretty good so far. It's very exciting and very cool. It lost a little in the middle, but it was a really good ending. It seems pretty well written and I look forward too future updates.

Gai: He is so YOUTHFUL! Just like Lee! *Anime tears*

Lee: Gai-sensei!

Gai: Lee!

Lee: Gai-sensei!

M: ... I hate both of you right now...

I'm starting to get all the Raven/Naruto pairings. Naruto's got a demon IN him, and Raven IS a demon.

I like it, can't wait till the next chapter.

Only God could know? Well then, that makes you God doesn't it?

Cool story

Nice I can't wait for the rest.