Reviews for Aftermath |
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Princess.B.Saber31 chapter 1 . 9/12/2017 Made me shed a few tears, I hope your happy (sarcasm). Lol. |
Mashed Potato-san chapter 1 . 11/25/2012 Ah, this was fantastic! And a sequel would be amazing, because there wasn't enough lovins between them. (sad face) However, besides that, this was a crazy good story! They were all in character, the descriptions were vivid, and the emotions were tangible and even had me cringing at points. You're a good writer. A very, VERY good writer. I can't wait to read more from you, so I'm going to stalk your profile and see if you have anymore KakaSaku pairings for me. Hopefully so! If not, you definitely need to make more, expanding on their face-to-face feelings. Because, as good as this is in itself, it still could've had some improvement with a deeper focus on their relationship. Keep ficcin'. Peace. |
meggz0rz chapter 1 . 5/14/2012 This was a very good read! Well done! Kakashi is a very hard character to write well, and you've done a beautiful job! |
Lil-BabYAnG3L chapter 1 . 7/2/2011 That was really sexy. Love it! |
craizypet chapter 1 . 3/26/2011 awwww! |
bonbon3690 chapter 1 . 6/17/2010 Utterly romatic and only a teensy bit cheesy (in a great way, mind you). I can't get enough of KakaSaku, especially when it is done so very well. |
DotsOnAWall chapter 1 . 11/27/2009 This is really cute! :D Dotty |
klv chapter 1 . 8/4/2009 wow. This is for that wide piece of hers, with the dogs on one side, Kakashi and Sakura on the other, and death in the background, isn't it? This is great. yihe! thanks! |
Mai Sode no Shirayuki chapter 1 . 7/29/2009 Thanks for the excellent story! It was very sweet and quite realistic. I imagine Sakura would have some insecurities in a relationship with Kakashi. And you have nothing to worry about! you did a fabulous job of portraying Kakashi. Even in so few words he managed to convey how much he loves Sakura! I can't wait to read more of your writing! Keep them coming please :) |
soccersyd chapter 1 . 7/28/2009 awe that was great :) |
ScaryRei chapter 1 . 7/28/2009 Great job - this fits Cynchick's artwork perfectly! Your writing reflects each person's characteristics so well, and it's very much in character. I'm appreciate that you were able to steer the story towards a happy ending, especially since the original artwork appeared very tragic with a worried Sakura healing a badly injured Kakashi. Thank you for stepping up to the challenge and writing this prize fic! |
Eldr-Fire chapter 1 . 7/27/2009 Ooh, I liked this a lot, Zel! :) The picture was beautiful, and I think you paid good homage to it! And I didn't notice anything off about Sakura at all. :) One thing though: the word "nakama" kind of threw me off there. I mean, I know what it means, but it seemed just a little bit out of place. *shrugs* Your choice, though. Other than that it was good! Eldr |
roxnroll chapter 1 . 7/26/2009 That was beautiful. I loved it. What a wonderful companion with the art. Rox |