| Reviews for Routine |
|---|
   beazlerat chapter 1 . 8/2/2016 This was so cute. Amazing job. |
| Myra Strickland chapter 1 . 12/25/2014 I love the romance. I also loved how you showcased Hardisons personality. Your story was pretty good keep writing for fan . One revision is you shouldn't use the term sex when expressing Eliot and Parkers relationship. Again , overall Fabulous! |
| jjgeraghty chapter 1 . 4/10/2013 This is a great story, I just really wish you add more to it! It would have been great to see how they told the team and to see how the relationship went for them! |
| Mishelle20 chapter 1 . 12/14/2011 A great fic. |
| Mistress-Cinder chapter 1 . 8/25/2011 Really sweet! I like them as couple even though I don't know if the show will ever take them there... |
| Alece chapter 1 . 3/11/2011 He was totally dating her without knowing he was dating her! LOVE it! |
| CamJ chapter 1 . 2/20/2011 ahah loved it ! And poor Hardison, bringing them together without even realizing it |
| MidnightShadow07 chapter 1 . 1/28/2011 Aww! LOL, I loved this one-shot! Great job! ~MS07 |
| Ultrawoman chapter 1 . 10/25/2010 Aaw, I love that! The fact that Eliot cared enough to teach Parker to fight, and than his slow realisation that they were dating without actually dating. Very sweet, as was their talk about moving forward into a real relationship. You have a real knack for these characters voices. Just excellent. ~Ultra~ |
| samson chapter 1 . 7/23/2010 really enjoyed! |
| csimesser1 chapter 1 . 7/22/2010 that was good loved it |
| almac1991 chapter 1 . 6/1/2010 nice. i loved it!lol. the extra scene was hilarious |
| Mayhem21 chapter 1 . 4/11/2010 Hey, I really enjoyed this story. I like the way it progressed and how Eliot and Parker ended up together after a gradual building on a series of events instead of them just suddenly confessing that they love each other like what happens in many other fics. I also really like that Hardison is the one that pointed it out to Eliot. One constructive thing, you seem to mix up "then" and "than" a lot. Just remember that "then" is supposed to used with sequences of events, like when you would say, "I broke the eggs into the bowl, then I beat them with a whisk, and then I poured them into the pan to start making the omelet." You use "than" when you are making a comparison, like when you say "The green glass has more Kool-aid than the purple glass." Hope this helps you remember the difference. Until next time, Happy Writing ;) ~Thalia013 |
| pdljmpr6 chapter 1 . 4/3/2010 Cute! Especially their sparring lessons, fire and gasoline, that's what these two would be together, I hope they get together on the show. Great job with this! pj |
| txfantasystar chapter 1 . 3/28/2010 Aw. Eliot in denial! It's a good thing Hardison cured him of that, isn't it? I loved it. Eliot and Parker are great. |
