d'awwwwwwww so cute, with the acorn and the cuddling and oh so cuute. It's all I have to say, oh! and interesting love tringle Zelgius, Link and Ike. And Queen Elincia, he's not blind it's love, wait. Blinded by love..Crud!

Anyway it was really cute, and I hope to see more of your updates soon.

From: Me/LearningAutumn ,

Pretty good plot and your descriptions were excellent. The story was a little short. You could easily make a good 20 thousand word story with this plot. You should change the story summary though. The story caught my eye because the summary makes it sound like a Link X Elincia fanfiction, not a fanfiction about Ike getting captured.

Also let the people know this is a yoi fiction, otherwise people who enjoy reading yoi fanfictions may pass up your story because it doesn't sound like what they enjoy reading, and people who don't enjoy yoi fanfictions will be upset that you didn't let them know.

Over all, your writing style and stories are excellent and you have a lot of potential.