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Good story. You made me feel like punching a chozo haha. That is a rare response, sweet idea!

Wow. This is very, very good. I was fighting to not cry at the end. I hopefully think that Samus is good, but that events in her life might have darkened her a bit inside. I truly wonder what will happen after Metroid Fusion.

Hm...never thought I would read a Metriod fic.

I like how the fic still leaves that question open: whether Samus is cold-hearted or not. Instead of looking at the personality of Samus we turn to those who had taken her in as a child, and the conflicting views of those who raised her.

I can recall one line which felt over dramatic, and perhaps lengthy for someone reluctant to speak. Minor things aside, its still a very good piece of writing.

It's OK. Not as good as your later works, though. It sounds somewhat overdramatic, and some lines really suck, like "However, what she didn’t know was that one day, she would be given a shell and forced to leave her beloved people forever". Generally, it's a lot like what I expected your early writing to be like.

Did you know about the Metroid manga when you wrote this?

On an entirely unrelated note, waiting for the next chapter of Silver Resistance is boring. I wonder what it's like to know that there's an audience demanding your work, pressuring you and judging you. Probably sucks some of the enjoyment out of writing.

Very cool, but sad. Your story added to the ambiguity of it all for sure. While it's hard to say for sure what Samus's true intentions are, I think it might actually be a little bit of both, where she fights for wealth and for what the Chozo stood for. Keep up the good work.

Wow, very nice. I personally think Samus still has good in her heart. It could easily go either way, though. We may never fully know. Hard to believe this was written so many years ago! I wish I could say more, but I really can't see anything wrong with it. Nicely done.

Even though this particular fan fic was written back in '03, it's still a good read overall and is practically oozing with charm. Your use of description and good dialogue complements the already well written narration, creating the most wonderful of experiences. I'm sure you are a far better writer now than you were when this was initially written, but I wouldn't be exaggerating if I said that I greatly enjoyed this work.

There's always room for improvement, and this piece is certainly not exempt from this rule, but there weren't any aspects or underlying characteristics that came off as feeling forced or bad.

I'm afraid that I'm not a fan of Pokemon fan fiction per se, so I have not and, for the time being, do not plan on reading your own. It's a shame that this was a one-shot; I would have loved seeing this idea, concept, and vision of yours expanded upon and fully realized. I hope you enjoyed writing this as much as I did so when reading it and I greatly look forward to any of your future works that will shine new light on the darkness that is the Metroid mythos. Cheers.

Ah, I remember this one. I love it a lot. Beautifully crafted and deeply emotional. I totally agree. :3