Oh my that was just so lemony good. The real Edward emerged from within.

Ya'll need to stop making Edward a doctor cause he just ups and fucks Bella whom he knows nothing about... i.e her sexual history.

...For some one who is about to be a doctor.. He sure doesn't look to care about his heath doing it raw like that... But meh it's fiction.

I don't know about anybody else but I kinda want to know what his family days and does when they find out about the tattoo and when they see it. Also when they find out Edward gas a girlfriend.

Awesome One Shot.

this was AMAZ!

He wasn so adorable, so cute... i loved it. I love a geekyward with his tattoo glory and a naughty inkella

I've never read any of your stuff before, but it was pretty good. I always try to anticipate the direction of story, but you did it a little differently from what I expected. My only complaint would be that it wasn't quite as long as I was hoping. But hey, not all my chapters are long either, so who am I to talk?

This was great! Can't believe this was your first story! Awesome job!

I really liked the premise of this one being sort of flipped from the usual Tattward stories, where Bella is the un-inked innocent. That was really cool.

Sadly, the lemon part was a little cliche. Maybe next time you right something like this, work on not using so many of the 70s porn-isms, like:

"She moaned, making my dick grow harder inside of her, as I started to thrust with abandon into her."

Or:

"I could feel her clench around me with her first orgasm, almost setting me off, but I held on. I wanted to give her more, all of me… my very soul if she would take it."

And this?

"All of a sudden, it was like someone else took over my body. I was no longer myself, I was an animal ready to devour her… a vampire ready to suck the warmth out of her."

I personally didn't care for the fact that your character, your Geekboy, turned into Fifty or Domward after that. I mean, sure, Bella calling him Geekboy doesn't mean he's really truly a geek who acts all meek and mild, I understood that, but when you did that to him, it just didn't feel like the character you established earlier.

For your next contest or whatever, maybe take those things into consideration, because other than that, the premise and everything else in this story was awesome. Oh, and sorry I don't have a account, but if you want to yell at me for this review, you can email me: roguereviewer

Best wishes, Rogue

PS- I found you though the TwiGirlsNextDoor read-a-long. :-)

Thank you so much for such a wonderful story. I don't know which part was my favorite. The geeky boy wanting a tattoo or how much he adored her by the end. Beautiful! TwiGirls read this for the #readalong tonight and I loved it!

H-O-T! Great story. I loved the evolution of Geekward to Tattward.

Your characterizations of Edward and Bella were very sweet and genuine.

Gotta love tatward :)

loved it

Nice little story!

3 it!