Sometimes you just need pwp. I liked it and I learned a long time ago to just write what you want and how you want and if people dont like it then fuck em.

Hey, don't take that person dissing your Japanese skills to serious. People running their mouth's mostly themselves have no skills at all.

But on the other hand, that gave your reader's some fine porn ;).

Though I do love Ikka/Yumi, the best part actually was Yachiru torturing our beloved Pachinko-Ball! I just really love the way, they all have to put up with the little pink-head.

Thanks a lot for this story. It made me laugh after a tough day, I had myself.

awesome fic i give it an A lol, love it

I like it!

Aw! I loved it! It was very well written and sweet but in chracter nonetheless. Great job!

wo0ow who knew Ikkaku could get it up so easily after he just melted himself into his lover... The Boys got stamina I tell you!

Yeah these two are a little hard to take seriously but we love them anyway. - And really who can't see all the strong bond the two of them share, it's very endearing on both their parts. Besides all that though they really are good for eachother, don't cha think? Great fic! XD

great story . bleach yaoi is my fav! 3 ~

XD that was a whole lot of awesome

Uh, they are the most obvious gay pairing from Bleach - to me at least. Think about how long the've known each other and that they're always seen together. Then add in them being 'friends'. I take them seriously. Good story.