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But yeah. this was good. A bit cliched of an ending tho

This is the most in character fic of Neku and Joshua I've seen on this site. And to top of it, this was written nicely. Probably my favourite TWEWY fic on this site. The ending was the best too.

I liked seeing Neku initiate the action first because in all the other fics it's usually Joshua being 'ohoho, Neku' when in reality (game reality, whatever) it would be something like this. Since Joshua would probably feel something like a pedo and hesitant since he's xxx years older than him but after that, it's all fair game.

Aaand just so I could say it again... This is the most in character fic of TWEWY I've seen on this site. Thank you for writing this.

Interesting story! xD

That is so far the best TWEWY fanfic I've ever read. Kinda jumping for joy right now Love the atmosphere the most. It gave off the feeling of young love and other sweet pleasantries God, I'd love to read more from you.

This was really cute! Guess I'm gunna have to take a look at your other works now.

["Dinner's ready, uh. Whenever you're ready to come down." He covered his eyes with one hand, reaching for the door handle with the other. He flailed and missed no less than three times before making a hasty retreat.]
Aw, poor guy, I feel bad for him. xD

LOL Poor Joe. xDDDDD

Uncle Joe...you just had to ruin everything. -_-

This was so good!~ I loved how you made Joshua give Ryhme a compliment; that was too cute! xD And the end was priceless!~

poor uncle joe, but aunt kimmy wants more *mew*

Kyaa so cute XD

ahhhh xD

i'm not sure if i reviewed this already, but awesome :D

the ending is a little cliffy though. i was kinda expecting another chappie, but then i was like: wait.. no chappie D:

i also kinda wanna know what happened with uncle joe X'D

lol but i guess i'll use my imagination~

Hello! I'm kinda new at this, so I apologize if this isn't exactly what you're looking for in a review.

I want to start out with saying that I absolutely love your writing style. Simply the way you manage to string the words together make this story a pleasure to read. That, coupled with humor, my favorite fandom, and my favorite pairing, truly make this one of my favorite stories. Ever.

You keep everyone in character so well, it's amazing! Throughout the entire work, I don't see one issue concerning OOCness, though I usually don't mind people being a bit OOC anyway.

...Ok, I know I said it, but I can't get past how amazing your writing style is to read. The details you put into sentences, they make the entire thing so clear to picture.

I...I really don't know if there's any constructive criticism I can give you. This story seems to be perfect in my eyes. Please keep up your writing! It likely benefits anyone lucky enough to have read it!

(Do I sign my name here? Oh well.) ~Scheduled Spontaneity

I really enjoyed this fic ] They were both in character, and Neku was really funny D The ending was adorable.

Haha, that was so awesome! The ending was hilarious. I loved this story! And they were both really in character- good job! Thank you for writing this, it really made my day. n_n