Loved it great twist

A very interesting and different story here.

Needs some work, but intriguing plot idea

I think you really should have explained how the story changed from canon. You throw us into 7th year but dont explain how the Malfoys are suddenly the good guys and are apparently spying for someone but not who they are spying for. Did second year happen the way it did in canon? That so far hasn't been explained. All we are told is that the Malfoys, Snapes, and Grangers are somehow all related and that makes everything ok.

I read this story years ago and was saddened when I went to re read it to find I had forgotten to add it to my community and favorites. I'm not good at remembering titles and authors and have looked for a long time for this story. So happy to have found it again.

Your story has a decent plot, but there were heaps of spelling mistakes and double sentences. The story was interesting I like you plot and chapter development but the story could have used a read through before posting.

Just what the hell is going on here? I can tell it's au, but you dont make any effort to explain literally anything. And on top of that, Terrible grammar, Ooc actions, I just can't follow this plot.

Just what the hell is going on here? I can tell it's au, but you dont make any effort to explain literally anything. And on top of that, Terrible grammar, Ooc actions, I just can't follow this plot.

Harry is a horrible person and a bit of an idiot. Her family were trying to protect her and he said that it was only his job to protect her as though she is a possession whom he just claimed. People can have many people protected and taking care of them, not just one. Hermione has a loving family and Harry is being awful to them, which is really weird because they were kind to him and took him in. He is really out of character. He threatened to kill Draco just because he pointed out the obvious and said that there were more people that tried to protect her. He took Hermione and apparated away from her own family who loved her while she was unconscious. That’s a bit like kidnapping. Hermione would have wanted to stay with her family and demand explanations while Harry held her hand. Harry is a horrible person who has no right to barge into their best friends house, get her pregnant, take her away from her family whom she needed most and basically kidnapped her. At this point he is no better than Dumbledore

This story is marvellous so far!

I just had to drop a note. I haven't started reading yet but the authors note reads like headlines in the newspaper! I love it!

Good plot, but already quit after first couple chapters, Too hard to read.

Sorry but is it ever explained why the fuck Sirius helped potion Harry and hermione? Seems like a very stupid and backstabbing thing to do. Can't like any adult in this story. All evil

Not bad done in a new way, keep up the good work.

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$