That’s it?! I need more! Please!

I have absolutely loved reading this story, from start to finish it had me completely gripped! Fantastic writing :)

Damn. So THATS what happened. That's fucked up

Eric is so intense. He still cares for her but can't stand to actually talk to her..I feel so bad for the both of them

Man Eric is soo jealous. I hope you do another flashback bc what could be been so bad that they had such a messy breakup? The suspense is killing me

Also, jealous!Eric made me laugh SO hard. He is so possesive

Omg finally, it's like love at first sight!

Eric is definitely intrigued by her. The only 'critique' I've found so far is that there aren't any descriptions of Paige besides she's 5'7" and later revealed to have red hair. I feel like I have to come up with my own image as to how Paige and her friends look. Which, if that's what you want the readers too, cool. I just found it out bc usually (myself incl) authors include detailed descriptions of their characters so the readers can envision the authors story.

Ahh so THATS how they met. I like that Paige has some balls, tho I don't think Eric is fond of that just yet lol

Nice start. I'm really intrigued so far. I wonder what happened btwn her and Eric that caused them to break up?

This was so romantic and it never felt cheesy or overdone. You did such a great job. Thanks for sharing your story.

love it.

But i was HOPING for a another Tue Blood story with Godric and one awesome OC.

Please.

You know im Swedish so i can help you with what Eric and Pam are saying

Whar happened

I will love to see a vampire-Paige