D: you shouldn't leave Hikaru like that! SEQUEL or Next Chapter please! :((((( i hope they end up together if you do so :) tell me if you do~~~ i rly liked this though, it was well written and you can feel the yearning there. cute. :3

aw poor Hikaru :(

but because it ends this way, I am free to imagine what comes next...heh heh _0

Hello :D

oh, oh, oh! I love this one-sided HikaKao with a hint of kaoru also liking Hikaru back. You touched some good points in this story. Kaoru should really be more honest but because he tends to overthink much, I believe sometimes he loses track of what he really wants and gets it confuses with what he thinks he wants. At least, that's the feeling I get. ;3

I love your HikaKao fics and I look forward to more from you.

Mabuhay Philippines! D

Wow...This is good and heart breaking...You should totally write another sequel...

Oh, poor Hikaru. Kaoru, why can't you see Hikaru want's you, not Haruhi. *sigh* Good story. _

Wrong Hikaru! Your not waking up from a nightmare! Your waking up TO a nightmare.

Sad, but cute.

This was really sad! Poor, poor Hikaru. So misunderstood. It's okay that it was angsty, that's the kind of Hitachiin twin stories we need. Everything else is to fluffy. I don't like fluffy... all the time.

-Chibi-chan

awesome story, but it's so sad..

i really want to see those two together ;3

why not continue this story? this would be a nice start x3

keep it up :D