Ah, this is squeel-worthy.

Heh, cute. :)

I really liked it, very cute end. I loved Kuki saying, "Yes, I know. Go on." Especially in a: Boy Admits to Girl about Funny Stomach-twisting Feelings type of situation.

And you pulled it off without much description. Awesome!

(PS. Parachutes is by Coldplay. Not the Fray)

You did a FANTASTIC job of digging deeper into Kuki's personality and exploring who she actually is, instead of skimming the surface of her usually bouncy self. For that, I applaud you.

This is extremely well-written and very cute, especially the end. I enjoyed the whole thing.

Keep up the great work!

Love,

Sadie

God, I loved this. I love it when people go beyond the outer shell of what bit of personality we see and dig deeper. It always makes for a good fic.

Brilliant job and this so heading for a spot on my favorites list.

- Lullaby :)

That was so cute! I wouldn't be surprised if that was the real reason behind Kuki's personality. Her parents really are intimidating, it makes total sense that she would try to keep herself from becoming like them. That was totally great, and it will totally be on my favs!

YAY! that was a great story! The first ending was okay, but I like the new one more!Excellent story...keep up the good work!

ahah...such a typical knd thing. poor wally comes so close to confessing, but he gets interrupted! I was surprised though, since it IS fanfiction, I was caught off guard when it really ended so...normally. nothing happened. huh.

so typical that could happen

No so close!Why did they have to be interupted again?

this is good

hope you write again soon