That was an incredibly good ending. A frank confession in such manner, and it doesn't betray his character. You pulled it out really well. Love it so much!

Wish there was more of this story, I really liked it! :)

Wow! Loved it. I'd love to know where this goes.

"I think not" - Wow, spine-tingling! I wish for more.

Very good.

Awesome!

You had me at "I think not." This is so incredibly messed up, and so them. Yowza.

Yes, everything MUST be dull other than the Good Doc. *applauds*

Very well done. I enjoyed reading this. You captured their characters perfectly. I would only suggest looking through again for some spelling a few technical details, like 'your' instead of 'you're'.

Besides that, good job. :)

WOW, ich liebe diese Story, so intensiev und genau im O-Ton der Bücher, man kann das Prickeln zwischen beiden spüren, als wäre es vor einem direkt in der Luft. Wunderbar! Ich liebte immer schon dieses Pairing, auch wenn es mir oft genug reichlich verrückt erschien, das zu tun. Aber ins Geheim habe ich mir auch immer gewünscht, die beiden würden zusammenkommen...(auch im Film), soweit ich mich an die Bücher erinnern kann, hat das Harris da ja klarer ausformuliert.

Alles vielen herzlichen Dank für diese wunderbare Story!

Anna

I thought it was a very good story, and a great characterisation of them both, up until the part where he says he loves her. It doesnt seem his style, too blunt, and too soon. but aside from that the ending was good.

This is brilliant. 'A man of whimsy, a plastic bag on an electric wind' i love that line :)

Keep up the good work! Her boyfriend most likely is a dull-ass motherfucker! You cant get any better than Hannibal the Cannibal! 3

S.G11

"She didn’t answer, bewildered by the shifts in his mood. A man of whimsy, a plastic bag on an electric wind."

~ A small tribute to American Beauty? This was heavenly, pun intended.

Nice fic - love the similes and pace of the dialog. Not sure I like Dr. Lecter professing his love so soon, and not face to face, but I'm looking forward to seeing the story unfold. Eagerly.