Wonderful! Thanks for writing.

I want to keep reading but mary is a horrible person in this story who treats marshall like a toy who she can punch and play with when she wants to

Okay her attitude is seriously annoying and juvenile like she is a teenager who doesnt want to take responsibility for actions she grown in this story she is sixteen

Wow she is kind a bitch in this story and not in the misunderstood/vulnerable way she is in the show its makes it hard to like her

let me get this straight right after she got shot you shot marshall then non of them should be working for at least a month no doctor would let them

wow she is treating marshall like crap

I would have loved to see the scene between Mary and the principal. You really put Marshall through the ringer, but at least they came out of okay in the end. I also liked how you were able to break up Mary & Raph and still have them be friends, I always liked him except for the fact he was in the way of Mary & Marshall. I though for sure when they split up they would get together but then Mary had to ruin it like she always seems to do and ran off with the D-Bag.

I think this was a great story, and I love how you ended it!

Just an amazing story! My favorite In Plain Sight story by far! It was wonderfully written and I felt you captured the characters perfectly. I loved how the story could have ended a few times and still been perfect. Believe it was Ch 15 when the first got together and then for an angst story in...ch 18(?) when they said goodbye. That chapter, the ending was just phenomenol how Marshall said goodbye. Loved how you incorporated the different languages.

I have to admit toward the end my eyes did glaze over and I did think at every twist of Mary trying to run, I just wanted you to end it already. But plugged on and continued reading.

Fantastic job!

Thanks for this beautiful story! Now I can skip Season 5. :-)

This is a very good story..can't wait to see if you write a sequel..

This is great! I really hope you plan on writing a sequel to this...I would love to see more.

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Nice ending.

Come on. Don't end the story now. It's too good not to be finished so please update.