I really enjoyed your story - it's a really interesting story line and wow did you hang in there with Sarah being mad longer than I thought you would but it brought it all to a big ending! Thanks for writing this!

A shame this wasn't finished but at the least they were on track to be together. Great story even tho it was abandoned.

This is so much better than Prague and all that crap in canon, WOW! Sorry you never returned to finish it, I really like it. Thanks .

Another good one abandoned in it's prime!

Man Sarah was really starting to get insufferable. I mean I realize she lost a friend but so did Chuck and she lost the chance at a normal life with the person she loves, but so did Chuck. And she never told him she wasn't going so Chuck thought she was leaving with Bryce and probably that she loved him. All this on top of the fact that if Chuck hadn't downloaded it they would all be dead anyway (which all fanfictions that have Sarah pissed after the 2.0 download fail to acknowledge). And Chuck is the one with the supercomputer in his brain and he's at risk of losing everything and Sarah decides to go ultrabitch.

Sorry for the rant but Sarah was really starting to grind my gears (yep family guy reference) in this story. Hopefully future Sarah isn't constantly on her period lol. Great writing by the way.

Awesome story! I think you had a typo in your last A/N. You said you'd be gone for five months but it's been five years, lol! Don't know if you check this site any longer but if so, thank you for this cool story!

Jesus. What a gut punch.

Ish.

This story had a soft ending, which is fine, I reckon. You never came back to writing, and hey, that happens.

But Chuck didn't die, and he and Sarah are okay for now.

Better than no ending at all.

If only Chuck had defended himself to Sarah in the dark. He didn't know she was going to quit. He only knew she was leaving for the Intersect mission, and Bryce.

But then they would have argued more and blah blah.

This is a fantastic story! I'd love to see more!

I was re-reading this story. It's really good.

I hope you'll finish it.

tx.

Only found this because someone else asked about it and I was nosey, but really enjoyed it. dont know whether you do plan to complete it, but it works well as it is. certainly immeasurably better than the way the show chose to go.

Really good story so far. Please continue when you have the chance.

i hope you'll be able to finish this soon, really loved the story.

Yay! Chuck is alive! I actually thought he died and it wasw scaring the crap out of me! Thanks for not being a cruel writer and killing off chuck

just wanted to say what a great story this is, I started rereading it when i was checking my story alerts and i couldn't remember what this was about but now that i have, i can't wait to find out how it all turns out. and i really hoped you enjoyed your time abroad