Ok I just want to apologise right now for the fangirl overload I may go into here. So yeah.
Oh My God. This is just AMAZING! The hours I spent reading this have been some of the most stressful of my life! Oh god I couldn't see the screen sometimes I was sobbing so hard. Oh god. Just... What have you done to me? I feel kind of broken.
But seriously, as much as I feel you have screwed me up with this fic I want to thank you for writing it. This is written so well, I felt like I was right there with them and I think you got all the characters really really well.
So yeah. Well done of writing such a good story, and on destroying me emotionally. I can't wait to read what happens next but I think I'll save that for tomorrow. I need a little time to recover.
I can't quite put into words how much I love this.

Usually with well written stories I use words like beautiful and gem. This is not beautiful. But it IS a good -great- story. Congratulations on capturing my whole attention. I'm disturbed at how into this I got. Definitely reading the sequel!

First off, absolutely loved the story, it was amazing. And I know you guys said that Devin looked sort of like a skeleton, but in my head I see someone sort of like Clopin from The Hunchback of Notre Dame. Some twisted kind of guy who has so much fun in causing pain, he also has fun doing other things, but in this case it is pain. Hope you don't mind.

Gah, this story was incredible!

I really loved ashes to ashes, also certain hope there's just something about the writing that's amazing and i don't know, addicting. We're all waiting for a sequel to certain hope!

I was supposed to go to sleep 2 hours ago, but I just had to finish this story. Not a lot of people can keep me from sleeping with amazing stories like this. I. Freaking. LOVED IT. Every minute, word, chapter, EVERYTHING was perfect. I couldn't have asked for a more enticing, energetic, suspenseful tale. I should go to sleep, but...
On to the sequel!

Wow. Wow. Wow.
I almost went insane during this book. Riley dead, Riley alive, me confused. Geez, you guys are sick, evil, twisted pyromaniacs.
I mean that as a compliment.
Wow.
Great chappies.

YES YES YES YES YES YES YES! MAKE A SEQUEL!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! NOOOOOOOOOT RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIILLLLL LLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!

Lol, Jaeh

Oh my gosh, this story was soooo. . .I don't even have the words to describe it! The suspense, the angst, the WHUMPAGE, everything was perfect! I loved it! I was thoroughly captivated in every chapter of this story. It was just amazing. :) I love the Riley whump!

I'm surprised at Ian, but loved it nonetheless. :) I really liked that Ian wanted to help afterwards.

Everything in this story was just perfect. Well done you guys! :D

That was a fairly disturbing story, but a very well-written one. Poor Riley, I am glad that Ben and Abigail will be there for him. Thanks!

The beginning of this chapter reminded me of the Lord of the Rings :)

kool

Wow... Just wow...! That was a story of horribly epic preportions! I feel bad about what happened yet I love the story! Sorry, haven't reviewed, been reading this on my PSP, the reviews on it haven't wanted to work. Though even if they had I was so speechless I don't think anything would have come out! But I have 2 things to say: 1 I feel so disgusted over what Riley and Ben went through yet oddly enjoyed it... *shudder* 2 I loved how you brang Ian into it, like him as a villian yet not cold blooded.