? So confusing. What? The darkness was done badly. Artificial and forced. Relationships are what? Formatting was also confusing. What is happening? Even if Mattie is American, don’t address him by that bc this is hetalia and that makes things messy. The firsts few chapters were okay, but then it turned into a clusterfcuk.

waaaaat

COMEBACK IS REAL! T,T Mein gott! MY WATERFALLS WON'T JUST STOP! ALFREDALFRED REALLY-! *sounds of muffled cries while reading the last part*
my God, Author-sanTHANK YOU, THANK YOU *,* I REALLY REALLY ENJOYED THE STORY, HUHU!

...sequel please...

It's been said before, but I'll say it again. This fanfiction is absolutely gorgeous. It's beautiful. There's no more to be said. I can explain it in no other way. The poetic irony was just gorgeous. It was so complex, and in depth, and literally every detail had a reason for being there. The messages that it was conveying are just beautiful. All of them, in their own ways. There is nothing I could say in this one comment that could completely explain how beautiful this is. This is the best fanfiction I have ever read and it's an honor to have read it. Thank you so much.

Nice ending

Are you a Capricorn?

Best. AU. Story. Ever.
I'm not joking.
:3

Oh my god, the feels! They consume me! Best AU fanfic I've read so far! :3

So, out of the many upon many stories I've read on here and published books I can personally say yours is the first and only one (as of today) to make me legit cry. I've never been this emotional about a story in my life... Your an A writer my friend. This story touched my heart... haha! Gosh, just thinking about it makes me tear up. It's a great story!

This is absolutely beautiful

I can honestly say without any reservations that this was one of the most touching pieces of literature I've ever had the privelege of reading, period. Never before have I been driven to tears by a mere story, but you've accomplished that and then some with this absolute masterpiece. It was expertly written, enjoyable to the last, and the most fun I've had when reading in a very long while. Thank you so much for creating this and sharing it with the world.
I will definitely be reading everything you choose to put up here in the future.
I could go on, but I can really only say so much before I risk devolving into incohoerent worship. Simply put, job well done. Very, very well done.
-Nix

This is like the best fanfiction i read! touching and hearbreaking..love the ending though, cant thanks you enough for creating this awesome masterpiece

Dude... you've just... you've just... oh man.

I think... that you may have quite possibly... just killed me. Totally. Utterly. Preposterously. And totally just ruined my school day tomorrow. Because I stayed up. Reading this awesome rainbowy goodness.

I mean... DUDE. I think I'm in love with you.

That was really intense. When I read the summary I was mainly just curious; it sounded like a plot that was very hard to control by its own, and I wasn't sure if this was my kind of story. By the first chapter I already knew: this was going to be EEEEPPPIIICCC and I was going to enjoy every. single. second of it. And you know what? I did.

I had no idea where it was going. The plotline was so unpredictable and kickass! AND I WAS SO EXCITED AND SO CONFUSED AND SO EXCITED AND I COULDN'T STOP AND now I've just ruined tomorrow for myself. Jeeze.

Anyway! THANK YOU for blessing me and many others with this story. Now if you please excuse me, I shall try my best to go to sleep for the sake of my remaining health. I want to do it now, but I'll check out the rest of your stories later. Bye! :)

WHOAA this story is epic!