Wow... This piece is so powerful and emotional. I really loved it. I thought it was beautiful. The thought of Demeter keeping Munkustrap from Heaviside by visiting him in her dreams is really interesting. I love it :)

Aww! I had tears in my eyes.

Very nicely written. :)

I like it. Very sad. I think you balanced everything very nicely.

Poor Demeter.

Wow. That was amazingly sad, but beautiful. That's probably the best oneshot I've ever read. Great job!

How very sad! Can you make this into a full story? I think it would be good as a full story.

emotional! I read it to my mother and she cried! And she's not even a fan of CATS! hehe! THat was very good! And I think I'll take your previous advice! PS I'm almost done with my next chapter... hopefully I can recover it fully!

There you go, making me cry again. Too beautiful. :-)

Aww! That's so sad! Your stories are so good - they involve the reader and make them feel like they know how the characters are feeling :) it's amazingly good - I have no criticism, constructive or otherwise! :)

Maddy x

You've inspired me to update Black And White now :P

Well, my dear, I thought I would return the favor and review a story of yours. This was very bittersweet. It was also an interesting idea of the Heavyside Layer, with the souls of the dead not being able to find peace until those that loved them let them go. Very interesting.