| Reviews for The Catalyst |
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   saixpuppy9 chapter 7 . 1/16/2013 crap i told myself id only start it tonight but before i realized i was done :/ crap i have school in the morning XD gonna die! :D but i love it so much . thank you :) so im horrible at reviews so sorry for grammar and any randomness that was in that XD |
| La Fuego chapter 7 . 8/22/2012 Great story! It was a very entertaining read with an engaging plot. I do believe though that you could benefit from having a beta reader go through your work - just for minor grammatical things (i.e. 'than' vs. 'then'; 'to' vs. 'too'; tense consistency and other such things) that I'm sure you would've caught on your own if you haven't been too busy actually fleshing out and writing the story. Other than that, I really, really enjoyed reading your story! Great job! |
| Allycat2090 chapter 7 . 6/30/2012 Aw, how sweet. This story was really cute, and for your first lemon, I thought this was really good. Anyways, I really liked reading this, plus, you reminded me of how much Unohana-taicho is feared. So, good job! |
| Lovely Spell chapter 7 . 4/3/2012 Awesome story. _ I couldn't stop reading. |
| KaKashiisWifey chapter 7 . 1/1/2011 I love this story! |
| emovampiressxox chapter 7 . 12/18/2010 I spent the first 2 hours of my morning reading this story, and it's SO BEAUTIFUL. I can't believe you haven't gotten more reviews than this! First off, it's one of the best stories on fanfiction when it comes to the use of the english language, you have little to no errors throughout the whole story. And the plotline was just enough to keep me reading, when usually diary stories send me over the edge with boredom. This one was actually exciting. Lastly, you actually succeeded in writing in an original character that I actually liked, which may be a first. Thank you for sharing such an amazing story. |
| net chapter 7 . 12/16/2010 Nice, really enjoyed it |
| AMETSUkai chapter 7 . 11/29/2010 Yay! I am the 40th to review! Anyway. I wanted to do it yesterday but was not physically able due to reading this story till 6 am in the morning. I just totally love it! I'm going to read others too! |
| In The Mix chapter 7 . 11/1/2010 LOVED IT! You did an excellent job! |
| killing u with umbrellas chapter 7 . 7/13/2010 loved it! |
| The Only Sane One chapter 7 . 7/10/2010 Intresting! I like it! |
| ash-heart1212 chapter 7 . 4/15/2010 aw...its so cute...and you're a genius at humour...the whole story was funny...] |
| ash-heart1212 chapter 3 . 4/15/2010 hahahahaha...ikkaku's reaction after he read the journal entry was hilarious...but i'd rather the person Ren likes to be Kira instead of Ukitake...(because wouldn't Kira be closer to Ren's age? not that it matters too much...) |
| The Animal Monster chapter 7 . 4/10/2010 I really liked your story, I really did. Althought you could have made Ikkakus character a little bit more like the anime or the manga. Made a little bit more... serious. But I loved it anyway!3 Esecially the end! XD I really do hope you'll write some more stories like this. |
| Lillyz chapter 2 . 3/8/2010 Aww I feel really sorry for Ikkaku right now! I would hate to be worried like that 24/7 about one of my friends. Well, one of my friend's got ran over once but she survived and didn't go into a comma. Anyways, great story I absolutly LOVE it! All of your stories are great actually :D! |
