sweet.

well foryour first on it is good i am reading some to getgoing on my own wish me luck

You really don't need to bold so much for emphasizing. Writing should reflect fluency in speaking/thinking. When we talk, we don't put emphasis on so many words.

This was a really cute story, I loved the humor mixed in with the romantic feel. I couldn't help but smile when I read this. Good work!

it was a little confusing at first, and the ending still has my mind running in circles. Can i ask, Dark and Krad have their own bodies right? cause that's what i got from the story.

Nice

Great humor, awesomely written, and I was squealing the whole time 8D. I loved it(:

I love you. I just want you to know that. I love you oh, so much.

This fanfiction was fantastic! You put so much humor into it, it had me laughing at the top of my lungs for hours at 2:54 PM AM while my sisters told me to go to bed. The intro was hilarious, the things about Satoshi were hilarious (staring at rice bowl for two hours, falling out of chair twice in one period, holding book upsidedown for 30 minutes straight, God I couldn't breathe from the laughter) Your writing style is amazing. Plus, this is the first fanfiction about the series I have read... I know the others won't be as good as this! TTTT I shall remember this always, and show it to my sisters. they shall be happy. After they tell me to go to bed. It's 3 AM right now.

I refuse.

“There’s something out the window.”

“Yes, very beautiful, Krad.”

The dancing donkey in a pink tutu danced away, and Satoshi continued to stare at his rice bowl."

Alright, that one killed me xD

Anyway I loved it :3 Keep up the great work!

(And somehow, I really see this happening xD)

Heh hehh cute!

I loved the part about the rice bowl... _

Lol! This had me rolling on the floor. Poor Dark-kun, always getting himself into bad situations...poor poor idiot. Sato & Dai were adorable, so was Krad. An overall great story!

BTW When are you going to update "Hell Of Heaven." Hmm?

OH MY GOD! That was great!

I loved how Sato and Dai both got the wrong idea before getting it right.

Haha! I about died laughing when I read how freaked out Dai was going to visit Krad. That was truely funny.

Hmm, Dark really didn't think that whole plan through.

Krad and Sato's revenge was great! Although I'd hate to be Krad after Dark's three months are up, the Kaito is going to be crazy.

I think this was a great Sato Dai fic, I can't really tell that you've only written Dark Krad so far. You should do more.

Hope to read more stories from you soon.

this is the first fanfic i've read of this pairing, and it was really swet~!

i love how you made dark xD he was hilarious!

well written! well done! D