Simply...amazing

I kind of confused of what happened at the end, with the disappearing lisense. This story was good i understood all the parts but that end part.

I'm sad that I read this. Since you have moved on from this fan fiction account I doubt you will read this. I think the writing was really great. I guess I'm just really sad about the ending and that Naruto didn't actually exist. I suspected it as I was half way through, but I guess I was hoping I was wrong.
I wish the summary wasn't so vague? I just don't like the relationship writers have with portraying mental illness as an effect for horror.
I guess I shouldn't expect some PSA about mental illness or anything, but I wish you hadn't also chosen romance as part of the genre also.

At the beginning all I could think was "What a beautiful style." You're style is really rare and stunning. Not anyone can take enough time and make their story this poetic and touching. Each word was playing with my kind. For a second I even asked myself "How can anyone write this perfect? Where did they find this much focus and understanding?" there is no way anyone can write something this way without lots of understandings of the situation.

When the story begging I was confused by sasuke's habit of sleeping in that certain circumstances but then it made sense, Itachi was someone he loved and thinking by him could...make him sort of relaxed and at peace. Then naruto got me by surprised and i kept wondering why is Sasuke still with naruto? Then that nightmare happened when Sasuke was kissing himself and turned into naruto...the complete opposite of him. I began to suspects somethings at that moment. "You already know my name." I had to know it actually meant something. Then the police came and Sasuke said they didn't look at him, it was like they looked through him. That was when I suspected everything and thought, what if Sasuke isn't real at all. Then the thing about naruto's brother teaching him how to lie happened and i got even more confused. Now I know the brother was actually Itachi who thought him how to lie. That's why the gun was in sasuke's hands while naruto was the one who shot him. "you need excitement" , "He didn't care" so that's why naruto liked to steal...excitement. So all those speeches, all those grins...they were all sasuke's and the scars on naruto's chick were only the sign of his own scars inside of him.

The part I don't understand is the licence part..."That's all I need to become you." So there had to be a uzumaki naruto to let Sasuke steal his identity which makes me wonder " why stealing naruto's identity? Why him? The thing he could get from a licence were just names and addresses and he got naruto's along with his was the complete opposite of him from inside and outside but what about his name and why did he started showing up at that moment while Itachi was dead a long time ago?
That even makes me think about how their parents died, they got shot, just like Itachi. In the beginning we thought he shot himself but it was Sasuke/naruto. Were they killed like that as well? By Itachi? Because naruto got born at that night so it couldn't be Sasuke.

Anyway it was an amazing story. Thank you So much for sharing it. I can see how much you worked on it. It was really beautiful.

This story gives me the chills. As I was reading it I started to understand the perspective of the story though I wasn't entirely sure until the ending what was going on. I enjoyed the story as it was a creative way to put Sasuke and Naruto as a couple without it being a normal cliche story of boys next door.

Wow, your fanfiction is so fanstastic Are you work in psychology or something like that?
Well, I'm really want to translate it into Vietnamese so everyone can read it. I promise i'll proved all information and content of the fanfic, and ofcourse, will trans with your permission (I can give you the link if you want, and even my email if you have something to talk with me)
Please reply me :)

This was one of the best one-shots I've ever read in my life. I love your writing so much!

That was intense

That was crazy awesome.

Wow this story was amazing. I will re read and as someone with insomnia I love how you captured the confused way the days blur together and how it effects greatly your minds focus. For example I can convince myself that things I am holding do not exist. Even homework that I am actualy holding in my hand can become 'not real'. It's pretty shitty to go to school and find out that it was real. Good work and beautifully written. I love the whole idea of heaven and the angels and God being the people at the hospital. Thanks:)

Goddamn. Just. Wow. So compelling. I'm honestly in awe. I feel like despite this being an AU, it's still unbelievably reminiscent of Sasuke's struggle in the manga between his childhood, innocent self and the apathetic, tortured soul Itachi creates. Such a perfect combination of disturbing and emphatic. Beautiful!

Beautiful.

This was awesome. I have to admit that it had been fairly confusing after the 'Hinata' part but who cares, this is fantastic. Well done. Now excuse me as I go look for a cliche SasuNaru story to read, my brain needs a break from the roller-coaster ride it experienced. :)

totally appreciate it! Best one shot that i've ever read! :)

this, this is pure art. How to put it, ah i dunno. It was overwhelming, poetic, rich both in style and theme. I liked how u portrayed sasuke's split personality. A very very good work.
P.s quick question during the sexual interaction, would i be right to say sasuke went solo