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   Aewina-chwan chapter 1 . 3/15/2018 Alors premier point je dirai : super super super bon ! Très bien écrit, histoire plaisante à lire bien que c'est vrai que tu aurais dû couper pour faciliter la lecture à certains qui aiment bien lire en plusieurs fois. Et pour commenter c'est plus difficile haha mais il n'empêche que c'était génial. La relation entre Luffy et Nami qui s'accroît est magnifique et particulièrement chaude ( surtout à la fin ouah je n'en pouvais plus ) Tellement d'amour dans ce one shot je te félicite, je m'attendais quand même à un citron mais ce n'est pas grave, c'est aussi plus délicat sans et puis on sait très bien ce que la danse qu'il lui réserve signifie hahaha ! Gros bisous * ajout en favoris * |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2014 Continue pls |
| 1327 chapter 1 . 6/30/2013 One word. Smexy. XD Love this oneshot. I read this whole thing in one sitting! Keep it up! (Insert Thumbs Up Emoticon Here) |
| Inferno 54 chapter 1 . 7/5/2011 16 thousand words! You're insane! Damn that was a good story, could have easily been 3 or four chapters long though. Took me forever to read it! It's like 3 am where I am roght now, so I'll try to do this quickly... You have several minor errors throughout the story, that is however, to be expected in any chapter above 8,000 words, not to mention 16,000, so you did incredibly well. TAhe nightmare, while it seemed improtant in the summary, only ended up being crucial for Nami's love devolopment, by halfway done, it was almost completely irrelevant. Your slight gore scene was fantastic, the fading away and realm of darkness was very cool, and very much like Luffy's Drowning in his regret in eppisode 505, which just recently came out, so congrats on beating Oda to that. Your characters were cannon, and that made the story all the better. You could have described the rest of the crews new outfits, instead, you ignored them. The ending was slightly rushed, and partially ruined the LuNa mood with Zoro's depressing fate. I hope to see more great work like this from you in the future, keep it up, and try to improve, if there's anything that makes fic's like these great, it's description, and you used plenty of it! Inferno54 |
| C-CHAN chapter 1 . 3/28/2011 A lot of romance, some drama, and a lot of humour to boot! Cool! |
| babylika chapter 1 . 3/1/2011 it's a good story, but in my opinion, the end is like...incomplete? i mean, i thought that there would be some "hotter" scenes between luffy and nami after their dancing... but the plot is good, i enjoyed reading your story :) |
| d962831 chapter 1 . 8/23/2010 Moar! |
| shittygomu chapter 1 . 8/22/2010 Oh god this story is just too good for words. It goes from kinda depressing to really uplifting to hot 'n smexy to fluffy to hilarious! It's a frickin' all-in-one story! Shit. I want to read the rest of your stories but.. bedtime for me XD SO, that means, I will read them tomorrow! So see you then! |
| san'Anhamirak chapter 1 . 8/13/2010 AWESOME! Haha this story was EPIC! |
| narutoxtayuya 4 eva chapter 1 . 8/2/2010 wow that was good good luck with all future stories |
| Dwood1324 chapter 1 . 5/31/2010 Wow if that wasn't the longest one shot lol loved it the party at the end was all modern lmao I just couldn't picture luffy dancing like that but I could see nami doing it |
| Saya List chapter 1 . 3/29/2010 lustfully good heehehehehhehe well mabye not lustfully, but great none-the-less however i want to know more about the two... and what was the bet... and the problem with zoro and luffy walking hand in hand with nami? curiousity... do tell |
| snapurjawshut chapter 1 . 3/23/2010 gosh gurl! like i said u write awesome..! IM not a one-piece ff reader,bt i really liked this! keEp it up!XD |
| Regsd chapter 1 . 1/19/2010 Wauw! O.O That was just amazing! It's so well written and it never gets boring, even thpugh it's pretty long for a one-shot (believe me - it's not a bad thing :3) |
| kazumalova chapter 1 . 12/9/2009 i loved it! the plot was amazing. will you write more on this i hope you do |
