tifa hissing saying to cloud chill with the touching till we are in our bedroom

Tifa to cloud seriously g rated what are we two year olds the author better switch to either pg 13 r or x other wise I will put my gloves on and use finalheaven on the author

tifa to cloud time for your punishment for lying to me earlier roll over and let me ride your ass

So much fluff! OMG! XD

Ooh, I loved it!

Oh my gosh that was amazing! So cute and funny and well written. Very well done! Instant fave! :)

Pffft, he so did that on purpose.

This was great. I love the way that you wrote it, and the way that it turned out. This is the first story I have read that it was Cloud that did anything to take any of it further!

Cute! And very funny - even your author note was funny "Me and fluff aren't homies at all. I mean, fluff is so gangsta that it makes me fully white." I lol'd. Well written, and strangely in character, I can see it eventually happening a while after Advent Children )

AH! Please write more, this is excellent! I love it:)

MORE MORE MORRE!

Lucifer :D

BTW, You should make an M rated sequel. xDD

XD I LOVED IT.

I really enjoyed the way you wrote this; it made it really interesting. So cute.

wow. Just - wow! How had I missed this? And what was wrong with me that I managed to miss this? This was - adorable and yet hot, sweet and yet sultry, it was gentle and teasing and just - how did I miss this? I love the way you caught them, the comfort and the awkwardness and the 'you tripped me!' moment made me laugh. Sneaky!Cloud... This was a lot of fun and yet it was enjoyably wonderfully tense too. I particularly liked the line 'uh-oh. There were those eyes'.

Woow, that was really good. I mean like really really good. You did a fantastic job! Wow!XD I absolutely love this story! 3

That was cute! Cloud's so sneaky. I love Cloti fluff, thanks for sharing!