Reviews for Passion |
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jacpin2002 chapter 1 . 11/4/2017 Nice |
bassoongirl14 chapter 1 . 12/31/2013 Awww! Loved it! Great story! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2012 this is a really good |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2012 LUUUUUUVED IT! |
Deidara1990 chapter 1 . 6/16/2011 its an awesome story |
Sasori's-girl99 chapter 1 . 7/3/2010 It was good. I'm impressed it being your first lemon. |
NekoChibiChan-sakurastar14 chapter 1 . 5/13/2010 That was your first!you have some freakishly good talent in writting these then. |
VinoTheRailTracer chapter 1 . 2/21/2010 wow sakura choose aa good guy. good story _ |
Amy Sabaku chapter 1 . 11/2/2009 A few mistakes with accidental word placement like 'b4' you should really put 'before' so it sounds more professional..I know because i have uploaded a one-shot of another anime which sucks but it was my first one and i am now writing a proper one well proper three ones Love Amy Uchiha X Gaara |
Huntress of Flames 55 chapter 1 . 10/11/2009 There is a few words that were wrong or mispelled. As for as she CUMMEd is the acutally word that is supported to be used. But i love it all bye |
wretyfguhiwaszx chapter 1 . 9/19/2009 Very good! |
Gaara's Lover267 chapter 1 . 8/29/2009 Not a bad story lol the only thing with me was the miss spelled words but hey who doesn't have those. even I do in my stories. I am working on a Gaara Sakura story and I am stuck as well so hopefully I can get some more ideas and have it posted for you guys to read. |
kallou chapter 1 . 8/18/2009 great job for ur first |
Moonflower1993 chapter 1 . 8/16/2009 it wasnt bad at all it was good for our first try _ |
smartpajer chapter 1 . 8/14/2009 WOW! SO HOT... And sexy! NICE LEMON! I LOVE THIS! :P |